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Hello,
I'm a beginner learning composition. This piece - march for piano - is the first I'm genuinely satisfied with. The form is a standard ABA, with quite a few abrupt modulations (but I quite like them). The most important thing about it for me is that it has a proper intro, a proper ending, there's some modulation that hopefully makes sense, and I hope that the two themes are developed in a sensible manner.

If anyone feels like it - please tell me what you think. Does it flow naturally?

Any feedback about form, voice leading, harmony, engraving etc. is greatly appreciated.

Thank you for all contributions.

Hello, this is a relatively simple but quite melodic prelude for piano. I'm learning composition in my free time so there's nothing spectacular in there.
It'd be great to receive critique on form, voice leading and harmony. Let me know what you think!

Thank you for all contributions.

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Hello, let me know what you think about this piece. I'm interested in feedback about form, especially whether it's not too patchwork'y. Of course feedback about any other aspect - notation, voice leading, musicality - is greatly appreciated. Btw, for some reason the middle part in F minor sounds distinctly "russian" - am I the only one?

Thank you.

Hello, I'd like to ask for feedback on my miniature piano Barcarolle. I'm mostly interested in feedback on overall musicality, quality etc. What interests me is also your reception of the form - it does seem a little complicated but I hope it will be evident that there's a lot of shared material.

Any other feedback greatly appreciated (hairpin over two systems on the first page is a blooper).

Thank you for all contributions.

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Hello,
This is a piano piece in which I've tried to focus on just nice melodies. I will be frank and admit that I am beyond satisfied with how it turned out. Hence, I'd be grateful for any feedback about it's ''musicality'' and whether I've achieved my goal (I encourage you to listen to the audio in the score video since it's far from robotic even if not perfect). As always any other feedack regarding harmony, voice leading, engraving is warmly welcomed.

I also have two more specific questions if anyone would be willing to answer me:

• Playablity of section starting at measure 30. The way I've envisioned it is the bass and soprano parts are played by the right hand whilst the middle harmony is played by the left. I'm learning how to play the piano but I'm very bad, so so far I'm sure that right hand is comfortable even with the switching but the LF seems quite awkward because the thumb sustains long notes whilst weak fingers have to play staccatto eight notes. Please let me know what you think, I do not want to write pieces which are hard for good pianists (even though obviously no one is going to play it)
• Bass melody in Adagio (m. 69) - I do not have access to a real piano so I'm not sure if the bass melody will be clearly audible or if it should be raised by an octave. I have been inspired by Chopin's Cello Etude and it does go into that register a lot, but my melody just mostly stays there.

Thank you for all feedback and contributions.

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Hello,
This is a relatively small prelude in D minor where I've tried to focus on voice leading and constant figuration throughout. I'm aware of some weak points, for instance measure 55 -> 56 has a parallel octave in soprano and bass. I didn't fight it because the soprano is just part of the figuration, the melody is lower.

I've posted my first piece a couple of weeks ago and received wonderful feedback regarding engraving - hopefully it's better in this one, though I do not feel like it is perfect (score video has varying number of measures per stem due to Musescore peculiarities).

If you have any feedback regarding voice-leading, harmony, structure, engraving, or anything else I will be very happy to receive it.

Thank you.

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