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Anyone realize just how much narration there is?

I’m making an animation for this cuz i really like the story, novel, and manhwa. But when I was story boarding it out, it really occurred to me just how much narration there is😭 Like not just Ed, every dam character lol. I’m not saying that’s a bad thing but geez man. It’s like 90% narration and 10% dialogue lol

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u/Traditional-Pipe-331 — 5 days ago

Anyone else wish there was more world?

What i mean is that like we don’t get introduced to many characters. And when we do they kinda plain ngl. I wish we got introduced to more guys like zigg instead of them focusing on the harem. I feel like that’s why people don’t like taylee either. He’s got nothing behind him. He is more understandable tho since he’s supposed to be the stereotypical good guy. But they couldn’t have let Ed make more friends that weren’t main characters? Also, we know like nothing about the main characters besides zigg and lortel.

And by plain i kinda mean like wade and the other first years. Zigg and others had more fleshed out backstories. Wade showed up and the story was like “This is wade, uhhh he’s the son of a general, and he wants to beat up semi-strong people👍” His only purpose was to make Zigg cooler (which i don’t dislike)

That is one thing i’m liking so far about the novel, is that more characters are fleshed out. Maybe i just missed smth idk man

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u/Traditional-Pipe-331 — 8 days ago