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(My first ever poem) Humidity
water droplets evaporate
hang in the air, a warm embrace
shade, shelter, inside or out
humidity that won’t be escaped
a hug from you functions in similair fashion
emotions dismissed, no matter how vapid
all attempts at exodus futile
your warmth denies all logistical factors
the longer in your grasp, like an anaconda tightens
in place of asphyxia, an encompassing bliss
regression to a kid
what lacked in the past, treated in the present
a sense of safety, a childlike tension
and finally, as the hold is released
a habitat of love, dissolved
a craving for humidity, increased
u/YazeedDaBeast — 2 days ago