u/Yurri_Yurri_Art

I am almost finished with my first novel draft. I fell upon this page and wondered if my own first two pages were catching enough to get someone to read on.

All the characters are based off of Arthurian legend.

Critique, questions, etc is all welcome.

My first like shot at serious writing, more of a personal interest with Arthurian tales turning into some twisted version of their stories. I was really just curious if anyone would read it and share advice/critiques/ideas. Anything really.

Editing is minimum please bare with my grammar.

Don't think its NSFW but there is like a kiss ig.