u/carsun1000

Good day to you all and Happy 4th of July. I wrote an entire TV show, first as a limited series, then turned it into a 2- season show with the possibility for a third one. It's Yellowstone-ish (with the different premise, but yes, cows and ranches, and imperfections abound). I currently have it as a treatment. I also have each season's bible and episode arc. I started writing the Pilot but stopped myself. I wanted to see if I could pitch it as is. Has anyone here successfully done this? What was the process like? Should I finish the pilot or just try to sell the idea? Also, with the market flooded with Yellowstone offshoots, can another ranch show be picked up without comparing it with the current market?

First 10 pages of my Thanksgiving action-packed thriller. A Sicario/Taken fix for the holidays.

If you're up for a compensated read of the whole script, let me know. 112 pages.

Logline: Two retired Special Operations soldiers spend Thanksgiving mobilizing to rescue their kidnapped families from a cartel operator who needs them to get back what the DEA took.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cLXDWh9ascLUNsAs98nfc8lF4MRVb4RO/view?usp=drivesdk