u/chicken_mcnugget7

Hey, I'm working on this screenplay and am struggling to make all the parts work together. If anyone wants to take a look and give some suggestions that would be greatly appreciated. I'm usually the one doing post production so this is new to me lol. This outline has all the parts layed out but not put together yet. The main thing I am struggling with is transitioning into the final act, and how to have the alien sequence play out in a way that's not repetitive, and also ties together with the rest of the film.

Also fwi this is not the correct format for anything and I some stuff might not make sense but lmk if you have questions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/192txoEVuw\_HCQMdJanq22fIi\_qSyDJGRAJ2MH1cbFQk/edit?usp=drivesdk

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