Criticism needed for our Webtoon
Hi everyone!
I made a Oneshot Webtoon with my team for Global Contest hosted by Mangadraft, we worked on it for over a month. I think the best part about this webtoon is that we are depicting the life of a Palestinian Boy in a war stricken zone. If we are able to gather an audience then we will be able to create the rest of the story that will depict the terrors of war and injustice of those in power, through the POVs of the two Main leads.
We actually need to see if the Oneshot is understood by the audience and if there is anything related to storytelling, dialogues, pacing of the panels, art direction that needs improvement. and would really appreciate it, if any insights is provided on the way the transitions between the panels are handled.
We want to see if the initial part of the story is understood by the audience.
we would be ever grateful for any feedback provided on the Webtoon (Oneshot).
And if the Webtoon seems interesting, u can Vote for us too!