u/hallo_dere

I've been writing for a little while now and I've had a story that I've been working on and I've never been quite sure how to get feedback or criticism on it so I put it up on royal road to try and get it out there and improve my skills and see if what I made is any good.

I'm not really trying to make money or anything I just would love the opportunity to get real people to see and read my work so literally any amount of feedback would be hugely appreciated!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/196254/aurum-saga-lumina-noctis