u/holymackinaw101

My crit

A brief view into my own brain's inner workings, where I come up with the most absurd alter-realities that would make any sane individual question me. In this short story thing, we are dropped into this world of mine. Do I know where this is going? No. Will I take it farther than this? Probably. The best way I can describe this is that it is an opening chapter to what might evolve itself into a narrative piece on time/taking for granted the ordinary things.

You will likely find my Vonnegut influence. What can I say. Someone as titzy as me will make an impact on my writing. God I love some good ol' bureaucratic absurdity.

I welcome feedback on all aspects of my writing. Thank you all!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/194nIHSM1czI1JS4PVQmTHqr5IVDl5CBN4E1Iz1Fm1aA/edit?usp=sharing