u/hwanshin

I wish I liked drawing hair 😅

Any advice is very appreciated, i'm super new to graphics + I'm sorry if this is the wrong subreddit 😅 This is a very rough draft of something I'll be painting on a shirt as a gift (want it to reflect perseverance). I plan to add more text in varying sizes and to get rid of the crosses above and below the right eye.

1: Should I alter the font, make the text box smaller, lighter add tone, etc?

2: Get rid of the circle, etc.?

3: Too much empty space?