u/i3at80n3s

Help a first time fic writer out

Alright so I’m in the middle of planning a tommy centric bedrock bros vigilante fic and I need some help with the main conflict solution. I’ve jotted down the main conflict (the gist of it is dream finds his identity and blackmails him using that so Tommy doesn’t interfere with a heist(he will)) and now I’m working on the solution that fixes it what I have down already is he goes to techno for help (techno is a hero and knows his identity for ✨plot✨). Cuz if you can’t stop them tip off hero’s duh (plus bonding moment!), but would he have to tell the rest of the sbi (Phil and Wilbur) his identity before the iconic big fight? Like techno is usually the smart one, and I feel like logically he would think of this and have him reveal. Though it could be like in the fight dream reveals him, it will happen either way, but should that be how Phil and Wilbur learn or not? (Feel free to come up with different solutions for this scenario)

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u/i3at80n3s — 12 days ago

Fanfic help

So I’ve had this idea for a Tommy centric fanfic for a while now, but I have a problem. I’m not a great author like I want 2000 words per chapter, but I’m struggling with getting past the first few paragraphs. Can any more experienced authors help me make my vision a reality? Please and thank you!

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u/i3at80n3s — 1 month ago

Tw: This post contains mentions of kidnapping, alcohol, abuse, dead

So I remember reading this fic where all of Tommy’s family was really bad to him Wilbur forced kid Tommy to drink and tried to steal him, techno blamed Tommy for Wilbur never being there, and Phil would only pay attention to him if he was drunk because Tommy reminded him of his dead wife. ANYHOW the main premise of this fic was that he would zone out and go to his dream world (it was basically the dsmp) where he was safe and none of his problems in the real world could hurt him. Though he would always lost time and his teacher (i think it was Sam) was super worried about him oh and I don’t think he really ever talked after smth happened in the story. PLEASE HELP ME FIND THIS FIC!!!

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u/i3at80n3s — 2 months ago