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Greywater (Part 2)

[Previous Chapter]

Greywater has a way of settling back into routine after something bad happens. It doesn’t forget. It just files things away. We write the reports, take the statements, bury the bodies—sometimes literally, sometimes not. Then the town keeps moving, because that’s what it’s always done.

For about a week after Stoker Street, nothing happened.

No new attacks, no sightings, no more scraps of paper. A few reports of staircases in the forest trickled in, but those were normal.

If anything, people were a little quieter. Carmine’s closed early for a few nights. The vampire kids stopped lingering out past midnight. Even Thomas stopped bringing anything more exotic than venison into the break room.

It almost felt like whatever had happened had passed.

And yet there wasn’t peace. Everyone went about their days more or less normally, but despite our best efforts to disguise or ignore it, we all had the same feeling: the sense that the other shoe was about to drop.

A week to the date of the Stoker Street incident, it dropped.

The call came in just after sunset.

“Unit Greywater-2,” Lorenzo said over the radio. His voice had that same wrong edge it’d had a week prior. “We’ve got reports of an armed individual on Maple and Third. Multiple callers. Possible assault in progress.”

I glanced at Geraldine. She was already setting her tea aside.

“Any indication of species?” I asked.

“Human,” Lorenzo replied. Then, after a pause: “But… behaving erratically.”

That pause did more for my nerves than the word “armed.”

“Copy that. En route.”

Maple and Third was about as normal as Greywater got.

Small houses, white picket fences, a park down the block where kids—human and otherwise—usually played during the day. There was a bakery on the corner that sold cinnamon rolls the size of your fist. Mrs. Dalton ran it. Sweetest woman you’d ever meet, twice as much as the goods she sold.

When we pulled up, the street was chaos.

People were keeping their distance, clustered behind parked cars and mailboxes. No one was screaming, which somehow made it worse. They were watching.

At the center of the street stood Mrs. Dalton.

She was holding a large kitchen knife, and there was blood on her apron that she was wiping from the blade, not sadistically or callously, but as if it was an inconvenience.

For a moment, my brain refused to reconcile the two images. It was wrong, unnatural.

Geraldine stepped out with me, her handgun loaded with hex rounds and her hand near the holster.

Mrs. Dalton wasn’t swinging wildly.

She was… pacing.

Measured steps. Back and forth across the street, like she was following lines only she could see. Every so often, she’d stop and gesture with the knife.

“No, no,” she huffed, voice sharp with irritation, like an exasperated teacher. “That’s not your mark. You’re too far left. It won’t work if you’re not in the right place.”

She pointed—not at anyone in particular, just into the air.

Adam Jackson was sitting on the curb nearby, clutching his arm, grimacing, a scarlet line running down his bicep. Blood seeped through his sleeve, but it didn’t look like a killing blow. More like he’d been corrected, like a misbehaving student.

I drew my pistol.

“Ma’am,” I called out, keeping my voice steady. “Greywater PD. I need you to put the weapon down.”

She didn’t even look at me.

“You’re late,” she tutted. “You’re all late. We’re already at the end of the first act.”

Geraldine came up beside me, her voice lower.

“That’s not hysteria,” she said quietly. “Listen to her; she’s completely lucid.”

I didn't say anything, but I realized she was right. There was no crazed rambling or screaming; just an annoyed old lady with a blood-stained apron and knife.

“Ma’am,” I tried again, louder now. “Put the weapon down.”

This time, she stopped.

Slowly—very slowly—Mrs. Dalton turned to face us.

Her expression wasn’t rage.

It was deep, genuine confusion.

“What are you doing?” she asked.

I hesitated.

That wasn’t the response I’d been expecting.

“Ma’am, you’re armed and you’ve injured someone—”

“No,” she said, shaking her head slightly. “No, you’re not supposed to be here yet.”

She looked between Geraldine and me like we’d just walked into the wrong room.

“I’m terribly sorry, but this isn’t your scene,” she added. “You come in after—”

She gestured vaguely with the knife, as if trying to remember a cue.

“The blood, after the blood, yes,” she finished, as if forgetting that there was already blood present. “Those were his instructions.”

A murmur rippled through the onlookers.

My grip tightened on my pistol, my heart pre-emptively shattering at the idea of seeing the sweet lady I had bought a cinnamon roll from the day before go down with a bullet in her head.

“Whose instructions?” I asked. “What are you talking about?”

Mrs. Dalton frowned.

“The Director, of course,” she said, like she was talking about the mayor or a local pastor. “He’s already watching, you know. He said if we get it right this time, the curtain will—”

She stopped mid-sentence.

Not because of us.

Because something moved.

I didn’t even see the Elder arrive.

One second the space beside Mrs. Dalton was empty.

The next, it wasn’t.

They were taller than Rûng. Thinner, too. I knew them: Knoschretha (or “Nosh”). Their form shifted in a way that made it hard to focus on directly, like my eyes kept sliding off them. Tentacles unfurled in a blur of desperate motion.

All of their faces—three that I could make out—were fixed on Mrs. Dalton. For the first time since I’d known them, an Elder looked afraid.

Stop,” they hissed, all voices speaking at once.

Mrs. Dalton blinked up at them.

“Oh,” she said, relieved. “Thank goodness! You’re part of this scene too. Good. I wasn’t sure if—”

Nosh moved.

There was no warning. No hesitation.

One moment she was standing there, the next she was completely wrapped in tentacles, the knife clattering to the pavement. A low, resonant sound filled the air—not quite a word, not quite a note.

Mrs. Dalton went limp, just like that.

The entire street went silent as the grave.

“What the hell was that?” I demanded, lowering my weapon but not holstering it.

The Elder didn’t respond immediately.

They held Mrs. Dalton suspended for a moment longer, then gently—carefully—lowered her to the ground. One of their limbs brushed against her forehead as if checking for a fever.

She will live,” they said finally.

Geraldine stepped forward, eyes narrowed.

“You placed her into a coma,” she said. Not a question.

Yes.”

“That was not your call to make,” I cut in. “That’s a civilian. We had her contained.”

All three of the Elder’s faces turned toward me.

*”You did not,”* they said.

Their tone wasn’t defensive or angry, but not apologetic either.

It was certain,

A chill ran down my spine.

“Then explain it to me,” I said.

There was a pause.

It wasn't the kind where someone is thinking of what to say, but the kind where they’re deciding how much you’re allowed to hear.

The name she used,” Nosh said slowly, “is a safe one.”

Geraldine’s expression shifted, just slightly.

“Safe compared to what?” I asked.

The Elder didn’t answer that.

When a mind begins arranging the world into acts,” they continued, “it is no longer fully its own.”

I thought back to Stoker Street.

To Edmund’s shaking voice.

Places, everyone.

My stomach tightened.

“This is connected,” I said. Not a question this time.

Another pause. Then:

Yes.”

Around us, paramedics were moving in, cautiously now. Officers were starting to take statements and were bagging the knife to take to the station. The normal rhythms of a scene reasserting themselves.

But it all felt… thinner.

Like something had peeled back, just for a moment.

I glanced down at my notepad. At some point, I’d started writing. I didn’t remember when. There were only four words on the page, in handwriting too neat for me, yet my finger and thumb bore the subtle pressure of the pen. It said:

Act One Ends

Intermission.

I stared at them for a long moment. My handwriting was never neat, but it had never been this messy either. Just like the note I found at Stoker Street.

Then, without really thinking about why, I closed the notebook. I began to walk to the car before I did a double-take. The moon was just beginning to rise…except for the briefest moment, I could almost swear I saw two moons hanging side by side, like mismatched stage lights. I blinked. There was only one.

Just like always, I thought, then paused.

Why did I tell myself that?

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Greywater

[Next Chapter]

Greywater, GA isn’t normal by any outsider’s standards. Thomas, my werewolf co-worker, would be a testament to that—he makes a habit of bringing fresh kill in for lunch. He used to bring live deer into the station, but after the break room incident three years ago, he’s been instructed to kill them outside first. In this quaint town of a thousand residents, the lines between supernatural and human barely exist: vampire kids play hide-and-seek with human kids under the streetlights, eldritch tentacle monsters run shops (though they prefer being called “Elders” to their faces), and as any officer worth my badge, I do my best to keep the peace. But even here, where everyone seems to get along, something always manages to slip through the cracks.

I was out on patrol with my partner, a witch from the 1800s named Geraldine. We had stopped at the general store run by an Elder named Rûngnoshqret, or “Rûng” to people who stopped by. I entered, passing a “Missing” poster for Daniel Mercer, the town archivist, who had been missing for over a year by that point. After buying coffee for myself and herbal tea for Geraldine, I thanked Rûng, but noticed something. On all four of his faces, their brows were furrowed in an expression of consternation.

“What’s up, Rûng?” I chimed.

The third face—which they used to convey fear or distress—fixed me with its singular red eye.

Officer Anderson,” they croaked in the strange, otherworldly manner as all Elders do, “we have sensed something troubling.”

That caught my attention. Rûng was known in Greywater for being as calm as can be, arming themselves with reassuring words and kind smiles (well, what passed for smiles.) If something was bothering Rûng, then it was serious business.

“Something going down tonight?” I asked, being familiar with the Elders’ clairvoyance (or rather, the ability to glimpse millions of possible futures.)

Many of our predictions show that you will encounter something odd, and yet human in nature. We advise caution, Officer, for we do not know who or what this thing is, and the details of tonight's events are shrouded. Should you be dispatched to Stoker Street tonight, be on high alert.

This disturbed me, of course, but I did my best to appear sure of myself despite knowing Rûng knew I was putting up a front.

“Got it. I’ll make sure to be on my guard. Thanks for the heads-up.” I paid for the drinks, then headed out the door, waving at him as they waved a tentacle in kind.

Geraldine and I parked once patrol had ended, chatting about what had been going on in our respective lives.

“…I am telling you, that cat shall be the fourth death of me,” Geraldine sighed, taking a sip of her tea. “She keeps insisting that she is the avatar of Bastet and that guests to my home cannot enter until they have gotten on all fours and chanted, ‘Praise be to Bastet.’

“Isn’t that just how all cats are?”

“Yes, quite. But at least normal cats don’t speak English. It is maddening.”

“Why not just give her to a shelter?”

“What is a witch without a cat?”

I was about to speak again when I heard the cruiser’s radio go off.

“Dispatch, this is Greywater-2, over.”

Our dispatcher—a ghost named Lorenzo—told us about a disturbance on Stoker Street, a frequent hangout spot for local vampire teens, some of whom were a little rowdier than others.

Usually it was nothing serious.

Maybe vampire teens sneaking blood they shouldn’t have, maybe a fight, maybe a noise complaint.

Tonight, though, Lorenzo’s voice sounded wrong.

“Unit Greywater-2,” he said over the radio. “We’ve got multiple callers on Stoker Street.”

Then he paused.

“They’re saying someone has attacked the vampires.”

Geraldine and I looked at each other, shock plain on both of our faces.

“Does it appear to be a slayer?”

“Negative, Greywater-2. The attacker has not been reported to be carrying stakes or using fire. They— Stand by, Greywater-2. My God. We have confirmed fatalities. Dispatching paramedics.”

“Copy, Dispatch. En route to Stoker Street.”

The radio switched off and I looked to Geraldine, who nodded. We drove quickly to Stoker Street. When we arrived, Carmine’s Blood Bar—a quaint, sanctioned establishment supplied by willing donors and promising the varied tastes of all blood types—stood with the crimson light bathing the street in front of it like its primary libation. The paramedics were already there along with fellow officers, loading two body bags in as they treated the survivors. When briefed about the situation by our lieutenant, Sarah McCormick, she told us that one of the survivors was lucid enough to speak after the incident, and would require Geraldine’s particular skillset.

We nodded and made our way past the personnel, finding a 60-year-old teenage vampire who shivered despite his body’s natural cold, and with a sizable burn mark on the left side of his face. We knew him as Edmund Drake, a young vampire who occasionally got up to mischief, but never did any real harm. Geraldine gently asked if she could put her hand on his head for a moment. He hesitated, but he complied all the same. Geraldine placed a hand on his forehead, uttering an incantation. His red eyes went from panicked to glazed.

“What do you remember, Edmund?” I asked.

“I was with my friends,” he droned. “We were trying to get a quick sip. We didn’t—”

“It’s alright, son,” I assured him, not wanting him to think he’d witnessed several murders only to get thrown into jail. “Go on.”

“There were four of us, including me. Marco, Lila, and Kirk. We heard him before we saw them. He yelled, ‘Places, everyone.’ He had…” Edmund hesitated in the middle of his hypnosis, trying to find the right words. “It looked like some kind of metal hook, a stage hook, I guess. It must have been made from silver, because he slashed two others open and crushed their hearts. We were a bit out of it, and it took a moment to realize what was going on. He…he pulled out a big flashlight and shone it on the others. It was a kind of purple light. They burned. Oh God…a UV light. He was using that. They screamed. I was still sobering up. He cut them but didn’t kill them. He…he cut these crown symbols in their arms. Then he shone the light in my face and burned me too. He was right on top of me.”

“Do you remember what he looked like?”

“He…he wore these dull yellow robes. Smelled like they’d been in an old theater for years. He had some white mask. It had a thin yellow crown painted on it and it was cracked a little. He looked down at me… My God… He talked so calmly. He told me to say… the—”He stopped, frowning. “I don’t… I don’t remember the word. Something about watching, or about a stage. I don’t know. I just remember his voice. Then he just walked away, like that.”

I was taking notes, then I nodded at Geraldine, who took her hand away. His expression returned to normal, though I knew Geraldine and I both wished the poor kid could stay under the hypnosis. We let a paramedic take him, and made our way back to the squad car. As we did, though, I noticed something. In all my years in Greywater, I had only seen one color from Carmine’s: its namesake red. Yet from a second-story window, I saw an odd yellow light shining. The room inside looked to be some kind of dressing room from what little I could see. It was empty, yet I felt like someone or something was looking at me from inside. I then looked into the alley beside it and my heart leapt into my throat.

Half-illuminated by this light was the assailant, just as Edmund described: faded yellow robes and a white mask. I was frozen in shock, and he took the time to do the most odd thing: he bowed, as if this night of bloodshed and terror was a spectacular performance and the wail of sirens and screams of pain were his standing ovation. I drew my pistol and aimed, yelling to freeze, which startled Geraldine. I turned to her for a moment and told her to draw her gun, but before I could finish the sentence, I looked back.

He was gone, and with him, the yellow light from the window. It was red, as it had always been.

She gave me an unsettled expression. “You think it was—”

“Matched Edmund’s description.”

She looked skeptical, but she didn't dismiss my concerns.

“We’ll make a note of it, but we need more.”

I nodded, holstering my sidearm and quietly berating myself for being so trigger-itchy.

I know what I saw, though. And I knew that whatever happened tonight wasn’t the end. As we were entering the squad car, though, something else caught my attention. A scrap of dull, yellowed paper had been slid into the crack of my door. In messy handwriting were the words, The first act begins.

The ink was still fresh.

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