u/notyourmomsuka

Hello, i am making an illustrated graphic novel, with 3 short stories included, each story is its own seperate story.

While i believe writing for a comic is different than creative writing i dont have any experience with comic script writing so i chose to write them simply in 1st person as a sort of narration type thing.

My main concerns are with pacing, reveals, the horror aspects ( is it scary or not ) and if its engaging to read.

These are not first drafts but english is my second language so excuse any grammatical errors !

I need feedback on the stories themselves before i move onto thumbnailing etc.

Thank you

edit - im dumb i forgot the link.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tdy62GhNqEJ50-CCq6iXqGxkapTopHRTWE6u9fYvb_o/edit?usp=sharing