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The fool
Nail down
Icarus. Fly
and reach, but phantasm
always drown in rich devouring flames.
Settle.
Heed my
call imbecile. Let your self fade
with each stale breath, for men
are weak. Made to
wither.
"Old man."
With scorched skin
he spoke. "tasting the sun,
tumbling towards fated impact."
"I'll smile."
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Been writing a few months now. Wrote this a while back! What do you think?
u/p0wahman — 1 day ago