u/targoon

I was prepared for the voices to change going into book 16, and I'm sure i will eventually get used to the new voices (except for my poor Niers), but does the speaking pattern improve at all? Theres a lack of inflection and intonation so far, which makes it read like this is a highschool kid called on to do a class reading.

I'm still only a few chapters in so I'm hoping Erin hits her stride. The voices just feel flat and lack any real emotion, and some sentences just feel awkward. It's hard to immerse myself in the story. Does it improve in the later books?