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NO HANDS ON THE TRIGGER [4782wc] - Near-SF YA Crossover

I have a few things I'm asking about specifically for this one. Please read the actual work prior to answering my questions if you can. I've spoilered them to avoid tainting the cold read.

>!The book features a cast of six, and I'm perfectly happy with the ensemble dynamics, but I'm worried that because the first two chapters are largely interior it may turn people away.!<

>!I'm curious about friction triggers. What segments feel skippable, or can be thinned down?!<

>!Given the target audience, is the medical / prosthetic / neuroscience terminology too opaque?!<

Thank you guys so much for reading!

u/yaz_antioch — 2 days ago
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SF (YA optional) with an ace protagonist

Pretty much what it says on the tin. Murderbot counts I suppose, but I would prefer somebody made out of meat. Near-SF would be best, but I'll take anything from SF to fantasy.

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u/yaz_antioch — 3 days ago