'Written by a girl' as an excuse to hijack my work
This is the third rewrite of my original script 'Diary'. I'm posting the full thing because it is already compromised. I was collaborating with this acting student for free and he kept giving vague feedbacks and had zero creative input. 'It's not deep enough, not poetic enough, not long enough'. I asked him multiple times to point out exactly what he feels is off and why but he lacked practical directions and kept saying 'make it better.' I made it clear that it is my work and he can't manipulate it when he gets the final version but that's exactly what he did. Added his own scene and started making corrections in my story. Then said he was 'co-writing' it and can make changes. Even went as far as to blatantly say 'the entire plot was my idea'. It was obvious at this point what he was trying to do. Never be a part of 'trust me' collaborations guys. Anyways, I'd appreciate feedback if you read it.