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Alternate Sequel Trilogy Outline (I know, dead horse)

I keep reworking an alternate sequel trilogy in my head based off the original Lucas Concepts, it basically finds a way for how the details would unfold in my opinion. I used AI to clean up my ramblings amin, so apologies if there's obvious signs. I know the conversation is a dead horse at this point, but lmk what y'all think.

STAR WARS

EPISODE VII: SHADOW OF THE EMPIRE

Introduction

It is a period of chaos in the galaxy. As the New Republic struggles to suppress numerous Imperial Remnants, powerful crime syndicates have laid claim to vast star systems.

Recently, a brutal gang war broke out between the Twin Hutt Clans over Outer Rim territory. Specifically at stake are several planets containing lost Imperial archives that house relics of the Jedi Order—the long-lost guardians of peace and justice before the dark times of the Empire.

Given the gravity of this conflict, General Leia Organa has dispatched her son, Skyler Solo, to navigate Wild Space. His mission: locate the archives before the sinister forces seeking to eradicate the Jedi can get there first...

Character Backgrounds

Han Solo: A cynical, disillusioned New Republic officer stationed on Felucia. He has succumbed to alcoholism, but still commands covert operations.

Skyler Solo: Han and Leia’s son. He serves under Han, executing dangerous covert missions alongside Chewbacca and R2-D2. In terms of personality, Skyler takes heavily after his mother: duty-bound and intense.

Thea Solo: The black sheep of the family. Possessing Han’s wild, rebellious personality, she ran away to forge her own path on a junkyard planet, where she spends her time modifying her own starship.

Leia Organa: Currently struggling to hold together a corrupt New Republic Senate that is already spread far too thin militarily.

Act I: The Gathering Storm

Skyler, R2-D2, and Chewbacca attempt to salvage an old, beaten-up Star Destroyer in Hutt territory, believing it holds clues to the location of the Imperial archives. During the operation, the decaying vessel abruptly drops into the orbit of a nearby junk planet. While Chewbacca manages to keep their primary ship aloft, Skyler is forced to take an escape pod to the surface, and R2-D2 is left trapped aboard the crashing Star Destroyer.

Now split up, the trio fights to regroup. While scavenging through the fresh wreckage, Thea discovers and recovers R2-D2. While repairing the droid, she uncovers lost holographic footage of her family together and happy, alongside the coordinates to Luke Skywalker’s hidden temple. Spurred by a desire for belonging, Thea resolves to find her uncle.

Meanwhile, Chewbacca returns to Felucia to rouse a sober-enough Han. Back on the junk planet, Skyler and Thea reunite. Before they can depart, they are captured by a pair of ruthless pirates named Snake and Symbiote. Making a daring, chaotic escape, the siblings successfully blast off into space.

Act II: The Shadow Lengthens

Thea sets off alone to find Luke Skywalker, who lives in self-imposed exile following the tragic collapse of his Jedi Academy. Thea fiercely debates the merits of the Jedi Order and his abandonment of the galaxy, ultimately convincing her uncle to overcome the self-doubt and fear of the darkness inherent in the Skywalker bloodline.

Simultaneously, a political bombshell drops: Leia’s true lineage as the daughter of Darth Vader is exposed to the galaxy, shattering her political standing.

Spurred to action by the crisis, Han sobers up and leverages his old underworld connections to gather intelligence on the syndicates and the rising Imperial Remnant, feeding critical data back to Leia.

However, disaster strikes when Skyler is ambushed by the story's primary antagonist, Darth Talon. Disguising herself as a civilian in distress, Talon seduces Skyler. She masterfully exploits his growing disillusionment with the Republic’s failing peace-keeping efforts, whispering that his grandfather, Darth Vader, possessed the true power required to end this chaos. She manipulates Skyler into embracing his dark side heritage to lead an Imperial Remnant against the Hutt Clans—unaware that he is ultimately a pawn in the grander, overarching schemes of Darth Maul.

Act III: The Spark of Rebellion

The conflict culminates in a massive space battle over a harsh, snowy lava planet occupied by the Empire. Before the chaos, Han shares a brief, bittersweet reunion with Leia and his estranged daughter. Luke returns to the galactic stage alongside Han and Thea just as Leia arrives with vital Republic reinforcements.

As Luke engages Darth Talon in a fierce duel, Skyler undergoes a dark mirror of Anakin and Luke’s heroic pasts, destroying a massive capital ship but solidifying his fall. Tragedy strikes when Han goes down with the Millennium Falcon, his final, heartbreaking comms transmission broadcasting to his family as the ship is destroyed.

The battle leaves Skyler badly wounded and in desperate need of extensive cybernetic life support. In the aftermath, Thea and Leia reunite in grief. Together with Luke, Thea vows to reconstruct the Jedi Order, pledging to bring together the galaxy's scattered survivors and train the next generation of younglings.

Major Themes

The Shadow of the Empire: The title operates on multiple levels. It represents the literal power vacuum left by the Empire that the crime syndicates have filled, the physical threat of the Imperial Remnants, and most importantly, the dark psychological legacy lingering over the Skywalker/Solo family.

The Burden of Heritage: Luke isolates himself to deeply meditate and reassess his life's failures. Leia struggles with the impossible dual burden of being a present mother and reconstructing a fractured galaxy. Neglected by their parents, Thea and Skyler struggle to forge their own identities while literally and figuratively scavenging through the wreckage of their parents' war.

Corruption of Youth: Darth Talon serves as the seductive embodiment of evil, luring Skyler down a path of radicalization—a narrative allegory for disenfranchised youth being recruited into extremist groups.

Acceptance vs. Defiance: Resentful of her mother’s absence and emotional repression, Thea initially acts out of spite. Her wild nature draws her to Luke, only for her to realize that becoming a legend carries a heavy burden. To grow, she must embrace her family as a whole, including the generational trauma they constantly run from.

EPISODE VIII: LEGACY OF THE FORCE

Overview

Luke Skywalker reunites with scattered Force-sensitive clans to rebuild the Jedi Order. He begins training and nurturing a new generation of younglings composed of Republic children and galactic orphans. As an initiation rite, Thea and the new students scavenge the wreckage of the Death Star to harvest Kyber crystals for their lightsabers.

Meanwhile, a heartbroken Leia is forced to wage war against her own son's forces while simultaneously investigating deep-seated corruption within the Senate, orchestrated from the shadows by Maul’s Shadow Collective.

Thea embarks on a spiritual journey akin to Yoda’s arc in The Clone Wars. Guided by the Shaman of the Whills, she learns the deeper mysteries of the Force and how living beings act as vessels for a vast, microbiotic symbiosis. One of her guides is a literal ancient droid, overrun with moss and fungi, acting as a direct conduit for the Living Force. During her trials, this keeper droid is tragically destroyed, and Thea loses her hand in a profound, ritualistic sacrifice.

The tragedy deepens when Skyler is ordered to assault the new Jedi Temple. Luke sacrifices his life holding his nephew back, buying enough time for the students to escape. Rather than scattering them, Luke’s sacrifice unifies the survivors more than ever before.

Ultimately, Skyler is betrayed by Maul and Talon, who sell him out to the Republic. Though politically pressured to execute her own son, Leia refuses, opting instead to freeze Skyler in carbonite. While the war against the Imperial Remnant is won, it proves to be a pyrrhic victory: the Shadow Collective has successfully seized de facto control over the Republic.

EPISODE IX: A NEW ORDER

(Vague Conceptual Ideas)

Darth Talon breaks Skyler out of Republic custody, intending to use him to betray her master, Maul. Instead, a vengeful Skyler executes her and sets out to destroy both the Republic and the Syndicates entirely.

Thea returns from her spiritual journey within the Force vergence, uniting the newly trained Jedi with Leia’s loyalist resistance to root out the gangsters corrupting the core of the galaxy.

In a moment of battlefield chaos, C-3PO is accidentally shot out into the vacuum of space.

The Climax: A final showdown takes place on the mystical world of Mortis between Thea and Skyler. This conflict ties the trilogy back to the fundamental lore established in The Clone Wars (The Father, The Son, and The Daughter).

Regardless of whether one, both, or neither of the siblings survive the duel, the fundamental resolution of the saga establishes Leia as the true Chosen One. Through her unwavering resolve, she successfully reunifies the Jedi, restores the Republic, and purges the crime syndicates—effectively suffocating Maul’s grip on the galaxy. This grand political victory occurs in tandem with her final, emotional reconciliation with her children.

Epilogue

Years later, R2-D2 travels to a powerful vergence of the Force. There, he discovers a heavily weathered C-3PO, who has been adopted by the wilderness as the new Keeper of the Whills, possessing little to no memory of his past life.

Sitting beside his old friend, R2-D2 projects his holographic recordings from the very beginning of the saga, retelling the entire story of their lives together to the blank-slated droid.

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u/ChefShazam — 23 hours ago

Seeking advice for first fanfic

So, after 6 months of writing I have just finished my first SWFF. I have passed it to a few family and friends for some critique before posting on FF websites.

What I would like to know is, how much tweaking does everyone do after getting critique back?

Grammatical and spelling errors aside, any story is not going to appeal to everyone and you can’t make too many changes or the story ends up being nothing like what you intended.

When it comes to plot devices, do you hope that the reader just accepts them, or do you put more effort into explaining your way around something?

Any advice on how far to go with feedback welcome and apart from any glaring continuity errors, should I leave my story as it is?

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u/Tambo_Five-by-Five — 23 hours ago

Fic Recs: Dark is not evil.

Now don't get me wrong. The Banite Sith are all baby-murduring, megalomaniacal, sadists. But there's nothing inherently evil in "Peace is a lie, there is only passion... The force shall free me."

Are there any fics that explore this?

Alternatively, do you know any fics where a Darksider is also a good person?

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u/MelonyBerolVisconti — 2 days ago

Obi-Wan centric fic

I read this one a few years back. It focused on Obi-Wan from his padawan years through the clone wars. In it he was adopted by a Mandalorian during his mission, and satine was there. However, his adoptive father only knew him as Ben and couldn't find him afterwards. It's a very found-family sort of fic that also focuses on Obi-Wan's lack of self worth.

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u/SeriouslyBasil — 2 days ago

Species Recommendation - Bouncer

So I need recommendations for a good species for a bouncer at the Star Wars equivelant of a Speakeasy. The place is distantly owned by a small Hutt Syndicate, run by a Bith, and is situated in a relatively developed world in the Outer Rim.

I would love something fairly intelligent, with a beefy build, but something closer to near human that wouldn’t be out of place guarding an upscale establishment so no Gamorreans, And I can’t do a Trandoshan, Besalisk, or a Weequay. Because I have them in other places and would prefer not to reuse them.

Any ideas?

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u/ThinkySushi — 3 days ago

Scarif in Rogue One

How do I get several characters off of Scarif and to the rebel alliance without them dying? There will be injuries suffered.

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u/SparkySheDemon — 4 days ago

My Fan Fic Character. Attempt At Canon Accuracy.

Character Profile: Dryden Eques

I. Core Identity & Concept

Dryden Eques is a padawan survivor ( about 14) of Order 66 living in total, self-imposed isolation in the deep canopy of the jungle world Myrkr. He is a "Ghost of the Forest"—a deeply disciplined, ancient-soul Jedi Master who has shed the soft, dogmatic protocols of the old Republic to embrace a raw, elemental survivalism. His inner world is a violent pressure cooker of repressed grief and trauma, entirely hidden behind an armor of total stoicism and absolute pragmatic silence.

II. Visual Design & Tactical Arsenal

The Black Cortosis Mask: Breaking away from traditional, pristine white, Dryden wears a custom matte-black Jedi Temple Guard mask. Visually, it signifies that he is a shadow of the dead Order. Tactically, it is forged from rare Cortosis weave; if an enemy tries to strike his face with a lightsaber or vibro-blade, the weapon instantly shorts out upon contact. Functionally, it serves as a sensory filter, shielding his mind from the overwhelming chaos of the civilized galaxy. The Robes: His attire features the dark, aggressive colors of Anakin Skywalker (black, crimson, dark blue), heavily lined with stolen Cortosis plating acquired during a daring, high-stakes raid on a classified Imperial mining facility on the planet Dinzo.He wears a cortosis chest plate, mask, and forearm gaurds and shin gaurds, mixed with his robes similar to Obi-Wan's Clone Wars Attire.​

The Bow: To remain entirely hidden and blend into the natural world, he hunts and eliminates threats primarily using a primitive bow. It serves as a visual metaphor for his discipline—requiring absolute stillness, breath control, and patience. The Unstable Pike: When pushed into close-quarters combat, he ignites a lightsaber pike with an unstable yellow crystal. The blade violently crackles, spits sparks, and hums with a dangerous resonance—the perfect physical manifestation of the intense emotional pressure he keeps locked inside.

III. The Partner: Katana

Dryden is Force-bonded to Katana, a massive, predatory native Vornskr. Because Vornskr hunt by sensing the Force, Katana acts as Dryden’s externalized, raw psyche.

When Dryden is calm and disciplined, Katana is a silent shadow. When Dryden’s repressed anger or trauma spikes, Katana becomes violently erratic and lethal. They operate not as master and pet, but as a single, telepathic, biological unit governed entirely by the "Law of the Pack".

IV. The Moral Code & The Brutal Truth

Dryden’s morality is not clean, modern, or comforting. It is a harsh, uncompromising code rooted in the belief that all life is precious, but must be respected according to its nature.

The Wild Cycle (Animals): When Katana hunts standard wild game (e.g., a wolf eating a deer), Dryden views it as the natural, baseline ecosystem of the Living Force. He turns his back out of basic respect for the cycle and casually handles the remains. It is practical and entirely free of human sentimentality. The Sacred Cleansing (Sentient Minds): When Dryden is forced to kill a sentient being (human, alien, or a highly conscious, feeling creature) that has no ties to the planet and will not be actively grieved by family, a strict, guarded priesthood begins:

  1. The Sentinel Guard: Dryden draws his weapon and stands guard, facing away from the kill. He enforces a sacred boundary of absolute privacy, ensuring no outside eyes can watch or desecrate the finality of a thinking mind.
  2. The Anti-Waste Feast: He allows Katana to consume the flesh. Because the fallen foe is unmourned on Myrkr, burying the meat would be a waste of organic energy. Letting the beast eat cycles that life force directly back into the planet's ecosystem.
  3. The Jedi Funeral: Once only clean, white bones remain, Dryden returns. He unfolds a pristine, traditional tan-and-brown Jedi robe from a stockpile hidden in his ship. He tenderly swaddles the bones in the sacred cloth and builds a traditional Jedi funeral pyre—mourning, cleansing, and releasing the lost life's spirit back into the cosmic Force.

V. Combat Philosophy

Soresu (Form III): Dryden’s default state. He uses an ultimate, impenetrable defensive posture, utilizing his Cortosis armor and pike to outlast, absorb, and deflect aggression. Juyo (Form VII): The terrifying, chaotic form he actively suppresses. When pushed into a corner to protect his legacy, his defensive wall shatters, unleashing an overwhelming, erratic offense that reveals the true, raw power he holds back.

Edit: Let me know if I should write a fanfic about him.

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u/PatheticIllusion0917 — 4 days ago

Looking for collaborators for a grounded Star Wars writing project

Looking for people interested in helping develop an unofficial Star Wars story/project to be set around the end of the Clone Wars and into the Empire years.

The tone is more grounded and serious. Think closer to Andor, Rogue One, Clone Wars political arcs, etc. Focus on atmosphere, character writing, lore, factions, politics and philosophy, worldbuilding, and storytelling.

Looking for people who enjoy:

writing/dialogue, lore discussions, worldbuilding, brainstorming scenes/characters, giving creative feedback

You don’t need to be a professional writer at all, just someone genuinely into Star Wars and storytelling.

Planning to organize everything into a small creative team, likely on Discord. If interested, comment or DM me with what you'd like to contribute with or what you think you bring to the table.

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u/MarksAndAngels — 5 days ago

Can someone give me the all the time-travel fix-it where characters (Jedis, clone troopers, etc. time traveles / everybody tiem travels)) had to wait in line to go kill Palpatine because the elevator was broken?

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u/CreativeEvil — 5 days ago

Looking for a time travelling Rey who joins Jedi and forms a relationship with Maul

I can't find a story from years back. Worse, I had it on notifications on fanfiction dot net and when I couldn't find it, I went through all my fav and followed authors and stories and it's not there. So it is possible that the Author removed it or all stories from fanfiction. There is a chance that the same story is still in other places but without remembering its title and/or Author it doesn't work.

What I remember is misty.

Rey goes back in time to before or around Naboo invasion not by using time machine but by the Force's intervention and in whole, that is her as a person and not as transplanted mind in another body. Jedi notice the disturbance and investigate. They accept her with extreme caution. Then somehow she says she is a grandkid of a corrupt senator Palpatine and journalists publish it everywhere. The not-to-be Emperor has no idea what's going on and insists he doesn't know her, so it is before he ordered his clone/her father. But his whole life explodes as journalists and Jedi investigate and his many crimes appear in news. Then Rey meets Maul who at this point isn't yet a die-hard Sith and first they go to bad parts of the planet to fight against bad guys and then start a romantic relationship. Jedi aren't happy because he is still dark but can't stop 2 adults. She has some interactions with Obi-Wan but not with Anakin? I don't remember if she becomes a full Jedi or a part-time Jedi associate.

Anything similar to my missing story?

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u/mala-mi-2111 — 5 days ago

I finally posted a new fanfiction.

I haven't posted a new fanfiction in a long time. I completely my longest fanfiction a few years ago and I just felt like it was a hard act to follow. Hopefully my sequel in a new setting will be well received. I really want to see where the story takes me.

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u/roaringbugtv — 5 days ago
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Looking for prequel era AU where all the Jedi are Sith and Vice Versa

Basically a massive role swap that went over Episodes one two and three where Yoda was the sith emperor and Palpatine was the hidden Jedi master

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u/MisterWam — 7 days ago

Is it better to just make an OC, or to bend an existing minor character to suit your needs?

Genuinely curious what people prefer both as readers and writers. Star Wars is absolutely replete with little characters you could expand into a character in a fic, but is that better than just making an OC to fill the same role?

Related question, how do people feel about OC relatives of main characters. I'm thinking in particular of making parents or grandparents of Rebellion era characters for a fic set in the clone wars, or the reverse, making descendants for clone wars characters for fics set later in the timeline. Do you like the connection or does it make the galaxy feel too small?

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u/GroundbreakingAct724 — 8 days ago
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The Legend of Liob by Killbothtwins

My second binding done! Unlike my first one this one has a lot of mistakes and mismeasurments but maybe it's thematic lol. Accidentally made the outside case too long, so I popped some of my extra extremely bright orange circles on it like a little reading frame.

Another good experience where I learned a lot!

u/just_this6 — 9 days ago

Looking for good Quinlan Vos Fics

I love Quinlan Vos, but i have a hard time finding stories with him as the main character most of the time, he's just a side character.

(Edit: Id also love to read little Quin fic but ill take any)

I'm looking something with plot, i dont care if there smut if there is id prefer bottom Vos.

Just share with me anything please I'm desperate for more fic with this man

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u/Exorcist-Twins-2 — 7 days ago

Fan novel

Hello everyone I’m new here. I want to hear people’s thoughts on a fan novel I’m working on and see if anyone would be interested in reading it when I get further along.
Here is the basic summary…

The story is set centuries after Episode IX, in a galaxy with no overarching government leaving individual planets to be governed by crime syndicates and scavenging politicians. The Jedi now are centralized on Jedha, having built a temple in the crater left by the death star. Due to a lack of surviving texts a faction of extremist Jedi, twisted by centuries of distorted oral history, believes even a whisper of Sith could destroy them. Paranoid, they crusade to eradicate all Sith influence as well as possible sympathizers. The protagonist, raised in this ideology, can relive the memories and feelings of those they kill, causing doubt and isolation. As they travel through diverse cultures, they question what peace truly means.

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u/Tight_Wolverine6302 — 7 days ago
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The Phantom Rogue: A Story of Two Academy Dropouts, a "Conflicted" Purple Blade, and a Ghost from the Past (OC)

Hey everyone! After some great feedback on my last post, I’ve completely reworked my Star Wars lore concept. I wanted to tell a grounded, gritty story about two survivors of Luke’s Academy who took polar opposite paths after the temple fell.
I’d love to hear your thoughts on the "Defective Inquisitor" blade and the dynamic between these two characters!

The Path of Separation (14 Years Ago)
Jon’e-thyn’s Expulsion: At 14, Jedi student Jon’e-thyn struggled with Luke Skywalker’s Academy due to his rare, passive gift of Force Psychometry—the ability to experience the history and raw emotions of objects through touch. Overwhelmed by these sensory "echoes," he began smoking Marcan Herb, a mild euphoric drug, to cloud his mind and deaden his Force connection. Despite his creative attempts to hide it, Luke Skywalker caught him. Because Jon’e-thyn chose a substance to mask his anxieties rather than facing them through the Force, Luke was forced to expel him. After Luke Skywalker caught him, he confronted him lightheartedly about his poor hiding skills, but the situation was still very serious and Luke expelled him for relying on a substance rather than facing his burdens through the Force.

O’Shae’s Retreat: While Jon’e-thyn left, Luke sent another student, O’Shae Celeste, into the deep wilderness to connect with the planet's natural energy.
The Aftermath & The Lie: O’Shae returned to find the Academy in ruins. The survivors (Voe, Tai, and Hennix) told her a traumatizing story: Luke and Ben Solo fought, and Ben slaughtered everyone.
The Walkaway: Shattered and believing the Jedi path inherently ends in betrayal, O’Shae abandoned the trio and the Order. She tracked down the disgraced Jon’e-thyn to deliver the news before they both drifted into separate lives in the criminal underworld.

The Present (14 Years Later)
A Clouded Life: Now 28, Jon’e-thyn is a nomad on the rainy planet of Vandor-Prime, working for the Guavian Death Gang and Kanjiklub. He stays heavily medicated on Marcan Herb to suppress his trauma and his Force abilities.
The Living Crystal: In canon, Kyber crystals possess a semi-sentient will and "choose" their wielders. A corrupted, modified Inquisitor lightsaber began calling to O'Shae in her sleep, prompting her to orchestrate a deal with boss Acacia Knoll to hire Jon'e-thyn to retrieve it.
The Catalyst Job: Underworld boss Acacia Knoll hires him to deliver a mysterious Imperial shipment.
The Crash: While riding a 125-Z Treadspeeder, Luke’s Force Ghost suddenly appears. Stunned, Jon’e-thyn crashes. In the wreckage, he finds old scrolls and a rare, modified Inquisitor lightsaber.
The Conflicted Crystal: When the blade ignites, it is a volatile purple. It belonged to an Inquisitor who tried to "bleed" the crystal but failed because of their deep guilt. The crystal resisted, absorbing the darkness but refusing to turn red, resulting in a rare, unstable hue.
The Shifted Call: Touching the weapon in the wreckage unlocked Jon'e-thyn's suppressed Psychometry. He absorbed the intense guilt of the Inquisitor who failed to fully "bleed" the crystal—a process that normally turns it red by infusing it with rage. Because of this internal conflict, the crystal resisted and remained a volatile, resisting purple hue.
The Rejection: That night, Luke’s Ghost urges him to reclaim the weapon. In a fit of anger over his past, Jon’e-thyn hits his pipe to forcefully "cloud" his master out.

The Betrayal and the Onslaught
The Force Bond: The next morning, a briefly sober Jon’e-thyn attempts to meditate and accidentally triggers a Force Projection to Acacia’s headquarters.
The Twist: He sees O’Shae arguing with a Guavian leader. Her cynicism has hardened into Dark Side ambition. It turns out she leaked the saber’s location to Acacia, using Jon’e-thyn as an unsuspecting mule.
The Allure: O’Shae is drawn to the weapon because the "conflicted" crystal mirrors her own state—neither Sith nor Jedi. She unleashes her powers, slaughtering the guards and claiming the blade.
The Relapse: Jon’e-thyn rushes to the scene. Luke’s Ghost intercepts him, pleading with him not to fight her. Overwhelmed, Jon’e-thyn hits his pipe again—the smoke severs the connection, and Luke vanishes right as he’s about to explain the truth about Ben Solo.

The Aftermath & The Violent Spark
The Crackling Blade: Arriving high at the slaughtered HQ, Jon’e-thyn finds the saber. When he grabs it, the blade ignites with a violent, menacing crackle (like Kylo Ren’s saber).
A Haunting Vision: The feedback from the crystal violently unlocks Jon’e-thyn’s latent Psychometry. In a drug-hazed trance, he sees a haunting echo of O’Shae’s brutal attack and the exact moment she betrayed him.
The Dying Words: He finds a fatally wounded Acacia Knoll. With his last breath, Acacia reveals O’Shae’s true plan: to use the weapon's terrifying power to dominate the criminal underworld. He gives Jon’e-thyn the coordinates to her next location.

The Crossfire on Vandor-Prime
Acacia’s Treachery: O'Shae later attacked and fatally wounded Acacia to take the lightsaber for herself. Before faking his death, a vengeful Acacia lied to Jon'e-thyn, sending him into a hostile Kanjiklub meeting as part of a power play to wipe out the Guavian Death Gang.
The Three-Way Ambush: Jon'e-thyn arrived empty-handed at the Kanjiklub site. As the gang became hostile, First Order stormtroopers—also tipped off by Acacia—surrounded them. In the ensuing chaos, the Kanjiklub opened fire on everyone. Jon'e-thyn used the distraction to escape back to his freighter jet, famously asking his attackers why they were shooting at him.
The Reunion Message: Safe in his cockpit, Jon’e-thyn’s communicator buzzed. O’Shae, who had only used voice transmissions for 14 years, sent a message: she finally wants to see him in person, setting the stage for their first face-to-face meeting since the temple burned.

I'd love your feedback!
Does the concept of a "Conflicted Kyber Crystal" (Purple instead of Red) fit well for an Inquisitor who regretted their actions?
Is the dynamic between a "substance-reliant dropout" and a "disillusioned survivor turned warlord" compelling?
How do you feel about the Psychometry being triggered by the drug-use/dark side feedback?
MTFBWY!

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u/SMooGIEBrand1k — 7 days ago

Fics where Palps die ignobly

My coworker got fired and our 50 hr week will now likely be 60 hrs. Please I need fics where Palatine dies stupid, ignoble deaths, preferably by Fox. I want all the crack. Help me forget the real world.

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u/a7152966 — 10 days ago