r/Shuyuka

Image of the draft dialogue that I wrote up 1

Image of the draft dialogue that I wrote up 2

Hi Shuyuka nation : D pretty much the title. About 16 days ago, I finished P3R and BOY did it make me cry, despite already being spoiled on what happens in the end (it still makes me miserable thinking about it). Despite how amazing I think the ending is, I really don't like how in P3R you don't get the option to choose who ends up with Makoto on the rooftop, with the only game having that option is P3P (so much for P3R being the modern “definitive” version of P3 lmao, poor Kotone as well)

So I decided that I wanna make a fan animation of 3/5 to sort of "set the record straight" for myself (or something, I'm quite a bit of a snowflake actually) anyways, I'm surprised I haven't really seen anyone take on the challenge of reanimating this. Tbf it's not like im on Persona Twitter all that often (while deciding if I wanted to include some fanart attached to this post, I actually found someone on Twitter called @TonyRG33 who made this post sharing a 3/5 fan animation of their own, and all I gotta say is great minds think alike (it's also very cute!))

I'm still working on the storyboard for my own animation, it's gonna take a LONG time to make this though (maybeeee 3 years? That's just a guestimate between actually learning to draw and animate better and doing said animating, as well as 3D modeling the rooftop to make grabbing BGs with the right angle and lighting easier)

so all of this to say that I need your opinion of the dialogue that I wrote. Is it in character for the two? Is the dialogue wonky in any way? How would you write it? I'm curious to see your opinions : D