

Enjoy while you can
Made this early morning
[ Trial of a Mother's Love ]


Made this early morning
[ Trial of a Mother's Love ]
My friend requested me to draw him heeheh
i miss my ai boy❤️
The last thing is something i would just update anytime a character would die while the first thing i did for fun. Anything thats red is injury’s they had after death and the black means they died during the game and some of them have red on their chest that means they died under what is shown. (Sorry if this has been done before)
I don't think he is going to let that slide(if you have any questions, just ask)
We should do more Tetro Purple memes i think.
(I would have edited their names in but i suck booty cheeks at editing.)
The only comment from the original creator that I can accept is that if Tsuno knew what Okazaki did in Chapter 3, she would beat her up like a b!tchy.
If Yokoi is "The potential girl", then Tsuno is "The potential woman". She truly lived up to the "a kind and sweet hero who dreams of protecting everyone, ends up feeling like they failed everyone" arc. Tsuno could realize that kindness wasn't enough and sometimes "evil" actions are necessary for the safety of others or herself. Among the Ramen Trio, I saw Tsuno as a fitting survivor. Imagine her returning to the public after the killing game, only to declare her retirement as a superhero and disappear. She realized she didn't have enough power. She just wanted to grieve and remember her good times with Isono and Wada.
She could be a mirror for Yokoi, I want them to help each other as much as they can to overcome their guilt.
I know Tsuno's arc isn't finished yet, so how did you rewrite her?
Chiba is a cheerful girl who loves to have fun. She also has great respect for Hama and cares about everyone. Ah... I wish the Tiger Trio could be developed more, just like I hope the Mahjong Trio can be.
I bet she was supposed to be a source of hope for the group who always helps them feel better, like Denden in Blue chapter 4. She always put on a smile so no one would realize she was scared and suffered. As someone who wanted to act more mature, Chiba learned to give justice to the victims but still tried to understand their culprit. I wish Chiba was also more assertive and angry at Hiroaki's behavior, especially when it came to Tamba. Because someone said Harada and Hama were the ones who were suited to interact more with Monomoko, of course Chiba shouldn't be left behind. She would love the rabbit so much if she saw the good things about her.
Another thing I can add about Chiba is her backstory regarding her career as a child actress and her relationship with her mother. I feel like the Tiger Trio is family to her, and I hope she tells Hama and Harada more about it. However, she could become a victim because she's quite famous, with that she is determined to grow stronger.
That's all I can give about Chiba, but how do you treat her in your rewrite?
In my opinion, if she survives, the dream of "Stop the killing game" will be handed over to her. As the student council president, Sasaki actually managed her group well and was careful in choosing who she could trust, like Yanagi. I wonder how she would respond and beat Hiroaki when he mocked her due to her backstory, she was under a lot of pressure after all.
Maybe if she had lived longer and not been a murderer, she could have led the trial better. She also started to open up about her feelings for her group, so she could get their help without having to be asked. She might grow feelings for Yanagi or Ojima, judging by how they respect her.
But what do you think about her and how would you rewrite her to be a survivor?
Mostly just an observation more than anything, but notably it seems like they're still getting views even long after the series' controversies and abrupt cancellation.
My favorite from PINK, but why did she have to die after the game!?!? She deserved to live and be happy... D:
I never watched past chapter 2 plz don't get mad.
BTW be honest, is this bad??
You know, I actually didn't want to ask this, because Kumada and Ikeda have been discussed a lot. But I saw a rewrite that Ikeda as a survivor could actually work.
Imagine, he had a sincere relationship and treated that person well, so they helped him not to be taken back to Kobe and live with them after the killing game. I wanted to see him overcome his OSDD and discover that Kumada loves painting and teaching her. I wanted them to reflect on each other through their behavior and past. At the very least, I wanted Ikeda to realize that Tei saw him as a purpose, not a person.
If only he became a willing and secretly caring person, and was finally able to stand up to his father, that would be cool to see. But how do you rewrite him and make him a serving survivor?
Why didn’t Ken just burn Kamimura’s student file? Like correct me if I’m wrong but there wasn’t a rule preventing him from doing that right? If he wanted people to not read Kamimura’s file destroying it would be better than just blacking it out especially if he wasn’t gonna keep it if he ended up winning (that man was gonna kill himself straight afterwards).
Also why did that scene even exist to begin with? The answer is probably so Von could shoehorn in More Ken x Kamimura stuff but seriously why? What was the point especially since who would care about any further attempts to ship them when they are both dead.
I can really see Hama having a survivor vibes. Despite his appearance, he's actually very sincere and caring, especially towards Chiba and Harada, so I hope he can keep the memory of the Tiger Trio alive. His talent (demonologist) really has great potential to explore Monomoko's nature and The Plane. His relationship with Tsuno and Wada should be developed, and I'd love to see him try to resolve the conflict between Hiroaki and Tamba.
How do you make him a survivor, for example if he manages to stop Watari from committing suicide?
Ch1: Kumada never got into the elevator, preventing her, Yaitabashi, and Hirose from becoming friends. The new pairs are as follows: Kumada-Yokoi, Denden-Ogura, and Ouno-Akiba. Akiba and Ouno more or less have a Boke-Tsukkomi dynamic, which keeps her occupied from planning a murder. Akiba also forms friendships with Maekawa and Matthias so he gets more character dynamics. Denden's friends are Hirose, Isoda, and Ogura(and Matthias too). During Voter Game, Kumada tries to pile the votes onto someone(Ouno suggests Ogura due to her distaste of her shenanigans), but Yokoi prevents that, to some extent. She volunteers for the No-sleep and No-food punishments and Kumada ends up with at least two punishments. So, Kumada takes advantage of Yokoi's state and stabs her multiple times. She disconnects the cuffs and runs off to another place to pretend that she was disconnected when the murder happened. She tries to frame it on someone but it fails and Kumada is executed.
Ch2: The Bleeding are as follows: Maekawa, Nishiguchi, and Ikeda with the recruits being Shishikura, Yaitabashi, and Tei. Maekawa chooses to kill Hirose by sneaking poison into the meal Nishiguchi prepares for him since he seems like the smartest non-Bleeding member in the group. With her Magical Powers and Matthias by her side, Ogura MVP's most of the trial until Yaitabashi gives in and confesses the whole plan, straining his friendship with Nishiguchi as it was their only chance for all six of them to survive. Maekawa's last words were to pass down her Morning Show to Akiba and to tell Shishikura that she liked him. Maekawa is then executed, which leaves Shishikura absolutely devastated.
Ch3: "Don't you worry Hidemi, I shall ensure that you and Ikeda Daiki escape your situation in Kobe." As Ouno tries to push the microwave above the shelf using her crowbar towards Ogura's direction, the announcement sounds. "Ding Ding Ding, Diiing, Ding. Attention Students. A body has been discovered." Startled, Ouno pushes the microwave wrong and it lands on Matthias instead, and a second announcement plays. Isoda panicks as they look for Denden because they don't want to lose her like the two lost Hirose, but what they saw was indescribably horrifying. Denden covered in blood with her eyes replaced with 8-balls as Tei and Shishikura are drenched in her blood with the latter writing using it. The three of them are then startled by the second announcement, and Isoda runs away screaming. Meanwhile, Akiba, Ninomiya and Ogura are absolutely devastated by Matthias' death and since Ouno was startled, she couldn't run away and was caught. Ogura then finds out that Denden died too, which puts her out of commission. During the trial, Ouno is implicated immediately, but the group can't tell whether Tei or Shishikura were the blackened. Due to the stress of the Killing Game and his eyes, Tei is severely stressed. Monomoko tries to help him by getting his eyes fixed and even puts him to sleep so he can recover. However, Tei saw Monomoko's domain and everything went wrong. Tei starts rambling about millions of eyes and teeth and it creeps Ikeda out. Shishikura, wracked with guilt that he helped with the Bleedings' plan and grief that Maekawa was executed instead of him, and Denden, devastated over the loss of Hirose, and without him to lead her away from the cult, is sold on Tei's cult. Tei mistakes Monomoko's domain for The Afterlife and is convinced that he can open a portal to save Yokoi, Kumada, Hirose, and Maekawa. And so, he devises a plan that involves the other two members. Denden absolutely refuses to kill Shishikura but he, who wants to be executed so he can join Maekawa, agrees to kill Denden, and she complies. Denden drinks a cup of poison from Shishikura and when the announcement played due to Tei's presence, the two immediately get to work. Shishikura ends up confessing and is executed.
Ch4: After Matthias' death, Ogura is holed up in her room, grieving. Akiba brings it upon himself to check on her, starting the friendship they couldn't start in Chapter 1 due to the circumstances. Akiba's also keeping watch over Ouno, but she won't leave her room. Ogura, however, eventually finds it in her to go out again. Since Yokoi was never able to steal Ninomiya's insulin, he runs out faster than he did in canon, and due to Hirose's absence and Matthias' death, he's very desperate to escape so he can live. He chooses Isoda as the target because they're easier to access than people like Ouno, Ikeda, or Nishiguchi. He tries to hit Isoda on the head but he's so sluggish that he stumbles around and even hits their shoulder instead. Isoda, falling into despair due to Hirose and Denden dying back-to-back, understands why Ninomiya's trying to kill them, so they just let him finish them off. Ninomiya's defense was that he was too weak to kill them, but Nishiguchi points out from her own experience that the contusions were spread out in such a way that she can tell that they were caused by someone who can't think straight. Ninomiya is then executed.
Ch5: By this point, Yaitabashi and Nishiguchi have made up and their bond gets stronger, Ogura and Akiba develop the friendship more and Ouno's being cordial with Ogura since she'd share a mutual friend with her(It's Akiba) and she'd eventually figure out that Ogura actually cared about Matthias and didn't see him as a mindless follower. Tei, however, is spiraling further and Ikeda is scared for him and scared of him. He's still going on about Monomoko's Domain and Ikeda can't do anything except watch over him since no one else would, and he's still Ikeda's main permission-giver for basic needs. One day, Tei just gets so scary and all up in Ikeda's face that he tries to defend himself and accidentally pushes Tei too hard and he hits his head on a hard surface and gets a concussion. Ikeda doesn't know what to do and since Hirose died, there isn't a medical professional left alive, so he thinks he killed Tei for real and runs into his room(They were both in Tei's room). Unfortunately, that causes Tei to die of bloodloss. Ikeda wakes up regressed, unable to remember what happened yesterday, goes to Tei's room and finds his body, triggering the announcement.(Huh?) Yaitabashi can't figure out who killed Tei because everyone else was accounted for but Ikeda triggered the announcement, but figured out that Monomoko played the announcement to make Ikeda seem less suspicious like how she turned Canon Shishikura's BDA off so Maekawa wouldn't be found out. Since this Maekawa died in Chapter 2, Monomoko was unable to form a super close bond with her, but it gave her more time to spend with Ikeda, which would justify her crashout when Ikeda was found guilty *and* comforting Ikeda at his execution, which happens in Chapter 5 now. Monomoko, feeling guilty that she caused Tei to get worse because she ruined his eyes, tried to fix them, but showed her domain in the process, which made Tei obsessive and that was what caused the deaths of Denden, Shishikura, himself, and now Ikeda. Monomoko's going to lose her best friend, Ikeda, because he got scared by Tei due to what she did to him. This is what sets up whatever arc she would've had in White.
I found his story rather unsatisfactory, like it had a start but didn't actually have an end. I found it rather difficult to believe Ninomiya wouldn't have tried to kill literally anyone else, and rather odd Matthias death wasn't really on anyone's mind.
Like with Ogura (do not get me wrong her story wasn't perfect none of it was its tetro) she had a whole god falling from grace, failing to protect a friend previously so feeling an even greater need to protect others than she already did ect ect... But I just find myself coming up rather short with Matthias. He's a character who has a great love for the world and a deep capacity for empathy and forgiveness, who as we can I am sure agree his side story with Ikeda completely died in the water (and yes if I could've changed anything I'd of had Ikeda apologies to Matthias 100%, but thats a side story not the main thing ykyk)
Idk I just felt rather bored with his final direction.
We should have learned more about her backstory, her talents, and her gang. She should have been a leader who contrasted with Yokoi. We should have shown her mourning the deaths of Nishiguchi and Yaitabashi. She should have learned she deserved to exist and corrected her mistakes.
So, how did you rewrite her, and how did you put her in action?
Like what the hell!?