r/claymore

Claymore is one of my GOAT comics and I decided to make maybe a fan continuation of the claymore series. I’ve been lurking in this group for many years now and I read claymore so many times ..

If I can complete this I maybe will do it. This is just supposed to be a simple version just armor and fighting and basic monsters. It don’t have boobs and all because if not I can’t post anywhere haven’t figured out that part yet …

But starting of this it makes me realize it’s super hard to make comics.

I have long dreamed of this diorama. Honestly, I can't afford the original diorama, so I had to print my own copy.

Height 50cm.

The print took about a week, I think in the near future I will paint it)

Before we start important note for everyone:

I want to clarify something essential to avoid any misunderstanding. I have dysphasia and English is not my first language. To help me share my passions, I only use grammar and spell-checking tools. These tools only help me structure my sentences, correct mistakes, and organize the words properly so that it is easy and pleasant for you to read.I do not use ANY artificial intelligence like ChatGPT to write for me. I do not use these tools to cheat. All the ideas, analysis, logic, and decisions about what I write come 100% from my own brain and my own hard work. Thank you so much for your kindness and understanding.

Hey everyone!!!!😁 I’m 17, and I literally just finished reading the Claymore manga from the very first page to the absolute end. Honestly, my mind is completely blown into a million pieces. It is an absolute, flawless masterpiece from start to finish. As soon as I closed the final volume, I realized something that I just have to talk about with you guys. Clare is easily one of the best written female characters in fiction, and it is specifically because she is the absolute,

literal antithesis of a Mary Sue.

Before I dive into this crazy long breakdown, we need to talk about what a Mary Sue actually is so everyone is on the same page. In writing, a Mary Sue is that incredibly annoying, generic trope where a character is just way too perfect. A Mary Sue has insane, god-like powers from birth without ever having to work for them. She masters every single technique on the first try, she has zero real flaws, and the entire universe basically bends over backward to make her look good. Everyone falls in love with her instantly, she never makes mistakes, and her victories make zero sense because they just happen because she is the main character. An anti-Mary Sue is the exact opposite of that nightmare. It is a character who starts at the absolute bottom of the food chain, completely defined by her weaknesses, her failures, and her biological limitations. Every single ounce of strength she gets has to be paid for with extreme physical trauma, psychological damage, loss, and insane hard work. Her victories follow a strict, unbreakable scientific logic built into the rules of the world. Clare is the purest definition of this.

In this post, I am going to dissect the entire story volume by volume, arc by arc, to prove to you that everything Clare achieves is completely earned through pain and logic. No random power-ups, no plot armor, no magical friendship power. Clare gets utterly destroyed from chapter one to the very end. Also, a quick heads up, I am strictly talking about the manga canon here. We are completely ignoring the 2007 anime ending because the studio totally butchered the logic and made up a random fight in a volcano that never happened. The manga is where the real story is, and it is way longer, darker, and more logical.

The Early Days: Crushing the Goddess Trope (Volumes 1 & 2)

If you look at the very beginning of the story in volumes 1 and 2, Norihiro Yagi immediately crushes any idea of Clare being a perfect heroine. Usually, a Mary Sue walks into a room and everyone respects her and thinks she is amazing. Clare walks into a town and the villagers immediately curse at her, call her a monster, and throw rocks at her. She isn't some warm, lovable savior. She is cold, emotionally distant, and she straight up uses a traumatized kid like Raki as literal bait just to sniff out a Yoma. She doesn't have a magical radar, she has to rely on pure grit. On top of that, she struggles and bleeds against completely low-level, generic monsters. She isn't secretly hiding some god-like power; she genuinely sucks compared to the rest of her order.

We learn very quickly that she is officially ranked number 47. In an organization of 47 warriors, she is the dead last. This isn’t some secret undercover rank to surprise people later, it is her actual baseline value. The Organization treats her like absolute trash and sends her on a suicide mission to the holy city of Rabona knowing she could easily die there, because to them, she is just a regular, disposable pawn.

Still in volume 2, we get one of the most heartbreaking moments that completely destroys the Mary Sue trope, and that is the death of Elena. Elena is Clare's only friend from her training days, and she sends Clare a Black Card because her body is failing and she is about to awaken into a monster. A typical Mary Sue would have used some magical friendship speech to cure her or save her at the last second. But Clare doesn't. She has to sit there, look her best friend in the eyes, and decapitate her with her own hands just to keep her human dignity. It is brutal, realistic, and sets the tone for her entire journey. There are no miracle cures in this world.

Right after that, during the Rabona arc, she has to take special pills that completely suppress her demon energy, making her as weak as a regular human girl. She gets absolutely mangled inside the cathedral by a shifting Yoma. Her bones are shattered, she is coughing up blood, crawling on the floor, and she only survives because regular human soldiers step in to create a distraction. The logic of the universe is clear right out of the gate: if Clare does not get help from others, she dies in volume 2. She has no secret reservoir of strength to pull from when things get tough.

The Backstory and the Genetic Deficit (Volumes 3 to 5)

When the manga finally takes us into her past in volumes 3 to 5, we get the absolute proof that her powers are a curse and a biological failure, not a magical gift. In the legendary flashback of Teresa of the Faint Smile, Clare is not some chosen child or a prodigy with hidden potential. She is a mute, severely abused, starved little girl who is completely helpless. She is a literal anchor dragging Teresa down.

The most tragic part of this whole story is that because Teresa finally opened her heart and chose to protect Clare, she lowered her guard for a split second, which allowed Priscilla to brutally decapitate her. Clare starts her entire life with a crushing guilt complex. She knows she is the indirect cause of the death of the strongest warrior in history.

To get her revenge, she begs the Organization to turn her into a Claymore, but she demands that they use Teresa’s severed head and flesh instead of a regular Yoma. Because Teresa was already dead, the demonic energy was super diluted. This creates a massive biological defect: regular Claymores are 50% human and 50% demon, but Clare is only 25% demon. Biologically, she is born way weaker than every single warrior to ever exist. Her low ranking isn't a mistake; her starting stats are literally hardcoded into her DNA to be lower than everyone else.

The Frankenstein Monster and Borrowed Power (Volumes 6 to 9)

Moving on to volumes 6 to 9, we see that Clare can only progress by sacrificing her own body and stealing pieces of other people. During her encounter with Ophelia (Number 4), Clare gets completely humiliated and physically tortured. Ophelia plays with her like a cat with a mouse, snaps her legs, and rips her entire right arm clean off. Clare is completely, utterly helpless. When Ophelia eventually awakens into a terrifying monster, Clare doesn't even defeat her through raw power. She has to watch Ophelia basically allow herself to be killed because of her own twisted psychology. Clare survives by running away like a survivor, not a glorious hero.

When she is saved by Irene, she doesn't get a cool training montage where she suddenly uncovers a hidden power. No, Irene literally chops off her own remaining right arm and has it grafted onto Clare’s body. Clare’s iconic strength doesn’t even belong to her. She is a literal Frankenstein’s monster built from the severed limbs of superior warriors.

But the manga keeps the biological logic incredibly strict here: Clare’s body actively rejects the arm at first. Her shoulder tears apart and bleeds because a number 47 body cannot naturally handle a number 2 limb. Even when she manages to hold it together, her one-quarter demon body is too weak to handle the insane speed of the Quicksword technique. Her human muscles literally start tearing themselves apart when she tries it. She doesn't master it instantly like a Mary Sue would; she has to constantly fight against her own body and use painful, exhausting mental concentration just to keep her arm from exploding.

The Massacre of the North and the Ultimate Loss (Volumes 10 to 14)

The Northern Campaign arc in volumes 10 to 14 completely destroys any concept of easy mode or plot armor. Placed in a team of survivors facing an endless army of Awakened Ones, Clare doesn’t magically get a power-up. During this arc, she witnesses the terrifying, unreachable power of the Organization's top weapons, Alicia and Beth, from afar. Feeling their monstrous Yoki from a distance forces Clare to realize just how insignificant she truly is compared to the actual peaks of this world.

Then comes the brutal fight against Rigardo. To even match his speed, Clare has to force only her legs to awaken, pushing her demon energy way past the point of no return. She wins the fight, but the cost is devastating. She completely loses control of her consciousness and her body begins to transform into a permanent, grotesque monster with blades ripping out of her flesh.

A Mary Sue would have used the "power of friendship" to magically snap out of it. But in Claymore, someone has to pay the price. Her best friend Jean literally lets herself get impaled through the chest just so she can use her final breath to synchronize their Yoki and force Clare back into her human form. Jean dies right in her arms. Clare doesn't save the day; she survives on the corpses and sacrifices of the people who actually cared about her.

The 7-Year Time Skip and Pure Physical Logic (Volumes 15 to 23)

This is where the 2007 anime completely gave up and ruined everything, but the manga proves why it is a masterpiece of logic. After the disaster in the North, Clare and the six other survivors go completely off the grid. To hide from the Organization’s sensory radars, they have a strict, absolute rule: they cannot use a single drop of their demon energy, or Yoki. If they activate it even for a second, they will be discovered and hunted down.

On top of that, Clare doesn't just spend these years getting a peaceful upgrade. During the seven-year time skip, she and the other surviving warriors remain hidden from the Organization and continue developing their abilities while learning to suppress their Yoki so they cannot be detected. Clare spends these years refining her fighting abilities and developing techniques that allow her to fight without revealing her presence. After the seven-year time skip, Clare eventually encounters the fused remains of Rafaela and Luciela at Riful's former territory, becoming involved in the events surrounding their fusion and the birth of the Destroyer.

So, how does Clare actually get strong enough to fight high-level threats when she finally breaks free? She spends seven entire years hiding in the freezing cold of the North and secretly training in the dark catacombs of the holy city of Rabona alongside the other survivors. Because she cannot use magic powers, she is forced to push the baseline human body to its absolute mechanical limits.

She spends seven years training her muscle memory and completely redefining her fighting style. She masters a technique called Yoki Suppression, allowing her to hide her energy entirely. To compensate for her lack of demonic power, she perfectly copies and integrates Flora’s Windcutter style into her left arm, combining its surgical precision with Irene’s raw Quicksword speed in her right arm. It is pure, logical, scientific dedication. Her strength at the end of the series is 100% earned through seven years of sweat, freezing cold, and discipline, not a sudden plot convenience.

The Ultimate Humility and the Final Effacement (Volumes 24 to 27)

Finally, the climax of the manga in volumes 24 to 27 shows an incredible level of humility that completely shatters the Mary Sue trope. When Clare finally faces the final, terrifying form of Priscilla, she knows she cannot win. Even after the 7-year time skip, even after all that brutal training, she is still just Clare. She is still the one-quarter demon girl. The manga beautifully respects its own power scaling the main character doesn't suddenly become stronger than the ultimate ancient boss just because her name is on the cover.

Instead of trying to take all the glory for herself and pulling a magical win out of her coat, Clare knows her limits and doesn't try to be the big hero. She completely steps back and allows the latent flesh of Teresa inside her body to fully awaken. It is Teresa’s legendary spirit and strength that manifests and finishes the job. Clare accepts that she is not the chosen savior of the world; she is just a bridge, a living vessel connecting the past to the present so that justice can finally be served.

Conclusion

At the end of the day, Clare is entirely defined by her limits, her scars, and her heavy losses. She has zero natural talent, she pays for every single win with her own blood, she spends seven brutal years training in secret to fix her genetic weaknesses, she relies on borrowed limbs, and she willingly gives up the final spotlight to her mentor. That is exactly why watching her win is the most satisfying feeling ever, and why the writing behind her character is flawless. She is the ultimate, undisputed anti-Mary Sue.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my entire post!!!💖💖💖 I put a huge amount of time and effort into writing this, and I really hope you enjoyed it. I absolutely love Clare, and I hope you can appreciate her as much as I do.

Irene feels immense guilt towards Teresa. She turned her sword against a warrior she respected deep down, and did it while being overflown with envy by Teresa's short-lived happiness. While talking to Clare she stated: "When I saw Teresa's face, back then in that village with you, my own heart overflowed with feelings of envy" But later on she committed the very same crime of desertion as Teresa, dictated not by genuine, high feeling of pure love and care, but by primal fear of losing her life. It is this realisation of her own hypocrisy that tormented her ever since—it cut her deeper than Priscilla's blade.

And you can really see those motives in her theme song, Shippu, the sixth one of ten character-themed songs from Claymore Intimate Persona album. There, her Japanese voice actress, Minami Takayama, sings about having hurricane tearing your soul apart from the inside:

"Regret for the many years of a raging heart,

hiding myself from the changing times

burying the past, leaving the fight

But now still, I think of you

strongly! strongly!!

In the raging wind, control of confusion

the spirit that controls this right arm

Remaining tranquil, seeing through everything

But my chest is hot! hot!

The pulse runs"

Her entire mentor/trainee dynamic with Clare is her long-apprehended chance for redemption for the past, which had haunted her. The one she never thought she'd get, the one she took without a moment of hesitation. Initially, she explained her desire to help Clare by comparing their morals: "Seeing the same things at that time and place, either moving forward or running away. I suppose that's what separates those fit for battle from those who are not".

It was, however, only half of the truth, which later slipped from her mouth: "Live, Clare! Your staying alive is the only proof that Teresa ever existed". Appearing tranquil with her heart scorching inside, giving away her remaining arm to Clare was the act which freed her soul from the grasp of neverending regret—she lost another limb, yet retrieved her integrity back. That is why she stayed calm while Raphaela was sentencing her to death.

And this is exactly how you write wise and strong-willed characters—not by making them detached, emotionless pricks, but faulty people like anyone else, people who nevertheless are brave enough to recognise and come to peace with their own drawbacks and to challenge their fears. And all of this makes her my favourite character of all Claymore; In my heart she will always be #1

The overall big picture now makes perfect sense, otherwise why would she sacrifice her last remaining fighting arm for someone [Clare] she just got to know without having any realistic chances of taking revenge on Priscilla? Claymore is a dark fantasy after all, in that world no one is walking around, eagerly ready to selflessly help others in need just for the sake of being a good guy

It may come off as somewhat far-fetched and I get it; only half of it is stated directly in the manga. But sometimes the best decision for the author is to provide the reader with clues and directions to help them figure it all out themselves, and not to outwardly show and explain everything. And I'm 100% sure this is exactly what we're dealing with. Norihiro Yagi was motivated by no mere fanservice when he was drawing the very last pages of the manga, there were many things for them to discuss indeed.

I have posted this deep dive on a different platform a while ago and thought it would fit here pretty well. Would be interested to hear your thoughts on this perception

Just snagged all 27 volumes plus the art book that came with the box set in like-new condition for $84 off FB marketplace! Just finished the anime and can't wait to dive into these!

Uuhh posted this already on r/berserk and wanted to do this crosspost thing but it dissapeared idk