r/draw

Hello there,

I recently started sketching again. And this time I tried Sketching Lune from Expedition 33.

I usually just look at the image and sketch whatever I see. But this time, I thought of trying the Andrew Loomis method for the head.

I did find this method better than just drawing what I see, as it got me a more accurate drawing. But I still wander off sometimes and just drew what I saw.

This did take me more time than usual, around 3.5 hours.

I'll share what each step kind of looked like.

I am still lacking some good proportions here, and yes, I do look at my sketch sometimes and think, "wait, she doesn't look like Lune at all", and sometimes it feels like "Yeah, she's Lune enough!"

You can share your opinions on how this looks. And any critiques or suggestions are welcomed.

Thank you.

Pencil Artwork on DIN A4 Cardboard

Things to improve.

Reference from Pinterest

Hello, finished my first digital drawing of a young adult version of the red riding hood wandering in the forest at night then she begins to stare something with curiosity due to her naivety that would be the mood that I'm trying to depict in the image.

the light of the moon comes from the upper right corner of the scene and is hitting her back.

Could you help me to figure out what I should improve in the picture and what should I practice first to improve my technique?