▲ 4 r/haiku
swiftly silently/the line of geese/crosses the sky
reddit.comu/Living-Age-4669 — 4 days ago
(A World of Dew by Kobayashi Issa)
summer evening—
train window holds
smudged fields
(The Old Pond by Matsuo Bashō)
pastel blue sky—
the dog's shadow
melts into mine
My haiku effort is meant to be read with the extended brief pause, the em dash.