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To be fair, I like this book overall, and I’m not an expert on female anatomy to be sure, but this seems a little implausible…

He responds with, “sounds good to me. But a mini is too small inside to pound you hard like that.”

My required short explanation is that this book is unreadable, but I also cannot not complete a book so here I am in purgatory.

Killing Commendatore by Murakami.

Member of the police are inspecting a shoe print left at a murder scene. They decide it cannot have been made by a woman…
I googled just to be sure, but “twelve or thirteen stone” is between 168 and 182 lbs….

For what it’s worth, this isn’t my book but rather, my sister’s. I picked it up because I was bored and flipped to a story I thought was interesting (this one is “After the Fade”, BTW).

I have no idea what this author normally writes or who the characters are, I just thought this was funny enough to share because I rarely come across stuff like this in what I normally read.

This isn’t even the worst I’ve seen, and the whole book is relatively tame in this regard, but the first picture is such a weird detail to include. It threw me off. If I read that someone crossed/folded their arms, I pretty much know where the arms are going. If someone is cold or making themselves smaller, the arms tend to be crossed a little higher and tighter, but would he write that a man crossed his arms right below his nipples or pecs? I don’t get the point of that. Lol.

The second picture was just bizarre. What the hell is a perfect madam’s bosom?!? I wasn’t aware that madams needed to have a particular bosom?