r/sunburnOMORI

Beginning his 53rd lap, the French skies opened and the rain poured gently. As it did, Sunny thought back to that rainy day in Faraway Town when he was just 12 years old, he remembered Aubrey and Kel slandering each other over their chosen color, how his ears turned red when he saw Aubrey's photo, the sound of the rain lightly tapping his umbrella. It was a memory he cherished, but for now, Sunny needed to focus, for there was still over 20 hours of racing to go.

Would love to know if this is something you'd want to read and your overall opinion of this extract. Also, yes there is Sunburn content but that becomes more evident a little while after this extract.

As the title says, I just want to see how well this idea sits with the Omori community. I want it to take place after the good ending and it will have Sunburn content. So basically the outline is basically this:

After Sunny decides he no longer wants to play musical instruments, a stark reminder of his dark past, he finds a new passion in the world of motorsports. With the support of his friends and a potential love interest, just how far will he go in his new pursuit?

So what do you think?