Looking For Honest Feedback on My Wattpad Story... Is This Something You would Actually Read?
Hi everyone,
Writing has been a huge passion of mine for a long time, and I’m currently working on a story that I hope to eventually publish beyond Wattpad one day.
Right now, the version available on Wattpad is still the original, unedited first draft. While I continue writing new chapters, I’ve also been going back through my original documents to revise and edit them, fixing spelling, grammar, continuity issues, and other mistakes that slipped through during the initial writing process. Because of that, some of the chapters posted online don’t fully reflect the edits that are currently being made behind the scenes.
I’m looking for honest, unbiased feedback from readers. Not just on the writing itself, but on the story as a whole.
If you picked this up in a bookstore, would it be something you’d actually want to keep reading? Does the plot feel engaging? Do the characters hold your interest? Are there any points where your attention starts to drift?
I’ve participated in a few review-for-review and book club programs on Wattpad, so my earlier chapters have accumulated quite a few comments and suggestions. However, once those organized reviews ended, the later chapters received little to no engagement, which makes it difficult to gauge genuine reader interest.
I know every writer dreams that their story could become something bigger, and I’m no exception. I’d love to hear from readers who can tell me honestly whether this story has potential, what works, what doesn’t, and what would make you more invested in it.
Constructive criticism is absolutely welcome. I’d rather hear the truth than receive empty praise.
Thank you to anyone willing to take the time to read and share their thoughts. It genuinely means a lot.
XOXO Siren
If you are interested in checking out my story I have my Wattpad linked on my account or you can find my story "The Mafia's Secret" by _unknownsiren on Wattpad.