u/A_Simp_With_Problems

I took a lot of the criticism to heart and worked to make sure I fixed everything that was pointed out.

Major points:
-The render not actually being rendered (that was on me, I considered simple shading rendering xd)
-Fixing the readability (a little mess and hard to find stuff at first glance

I want to check if this new and improved version is up to standard and would still like to improve it if it’s needed!

I’ve added both the new sheet and old sheet for comparison!!

Edit: I hadn’t realized how much Reddit lowers the quality of the image oof and also I wanted to add that I actually included my media handle which seems to also been common practice on commission sheets xd

I just want to know if my commission sheet is good and if my prices seem fair! I honestly haven’t been able to round up a good audience that’s seems very interested in my art so some help would be nice :D