Hello
Hello everyone!
I recently published my very first web novel on Wattpad, and I'd be incredibly grateful if anyone could give it a chance.
I'm looking for honest feedback, reviews, and constructive criticism to help me improve as a writer. If you enjoy it, a vote would mean a lot to me as well.
📖 Title: O Conto do Deus da Guerra (The Tale of the God of War)
Story Link:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/412282563-o-conto-do-deus-da-guerra
Synopsis:
In a world ruled by Aura, magic, monsters, and powerful clans, Karim was born with no talent at all.
After losing everything to a legendary dragon, he awakens in the Celestial Cemetery, a realm where the souls of history's greatest heroes continue to exist after death.
Kings. Emperors. Saints. Martial Gods.
To return to the world of the living, Karim must earn the recognition of the dead themselves.
Any feedback is appreciated. Thank you for your time, and I hope you enjoy the story!