u/AdorableCry9286

[In Progress] [6K] [Gothic Romance] The Moonlight Revenant

"The Moonlight Revenant" follows Cecily, a shy young woman living in the church, and her interactions with The Shadow, the infamous outlaw that stalks the city of Eureka in the Wild West. As the pair keep crossing paths in the moonlight hours, they become unlikely companions.

Feedback and timeline: Any feedback is welcome. I want to know if you see the twist coming or are completely surprised. Do any of the scenes need more description, and does the story keep your attention? I am working on a strict deadline and would ideally like feedback within one week. I am willing to swap any story with the same or a lower word count in any genre except fantasy.

with the same or lower word count in any genre except

DM me if interested!

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u/AdorableCry9286 — 8 days ago