u/AeliosArt

Hey guys I'd love some feedback on the prologue and first chapter of my novel "The Wielders of the Trigem".

The story is intended to be a dystopian-inspired quasi-medieval epic fantasy. The world has very detailed history and metaphysics that are needed to understand the narrative, and I'm sure you know that that kind of world building is at high risk of info dumping, poor pacing, etc. So my aim is to introduce core concepts early, quickly, and within a narrative context that both presents the world and introduces the characters in compelling ways.

I would love to hear your critical feedback to see how well I am succeeding in both introducing the characters and the world, and where I might be lacking and could improve. I love honest critiques, and I would love to hear what you have.