u/AffectionateDraw6162

I took some of the advice of my previous post, and tried making it better. Does it read as falling yet, or does it need another go at the revision?

First try for reference; Does this read as falling down? : r/learnanimation

Tried to do one of those things where the character falls down but the camera rotates with them. Does it read as that, and what can I do to make it better?

I made some revisions; Does this read as falling?(part two I guess) : r/learnanimation