Visual Priorities |Translation Progress Update #1

Hi everyone, good morning/good afternoon/good night

Well, yesterday I finished translating, in a sloppy and unrevised way, Day 1 of the DDPS Demo into English.

Day 2 is almost halfway through being completely translated.

I just hope that when I release this English version of the DDPS Demo, people will only complain about the grammar and spelling.

Anyway, I'm doing this just trying to save time to write down the rest of Act 1 on paper. To have everything ready so I can just code the rest in August...

Thanks for reading and have a great day!

u/Agreeable-Lynx-2380 — 2 days ago

DDPS Act 1 Demo: 1 week later (Feedback and Q&A)

Hey everyone, good morning/good afternoon/good night

Good,​It's been exactly one week since I released the Doki Doki Purple Skies (DDPS) Act 1 Demo! First of all, I want to thank everyone who upvoted, downloaded, and took the time to check out the project.

​As a solo developer, writing and coding this has been a deeply personal journey. Now, I want to hear from you to know if the story is hitting the right spots and if I should keep pushing forward with the next Days of Act 1.

​I’ve prepared a mix of open discussion and a quick questionnaire. Feel free to answer as much or as little as you want!

​💬 The Questionnaire (Point-by-Point)

​The Pacing & Writing: How did you feel about the flow of the dialogues from Day 1 to Day 3? Did Yuri's interactions and her way of expressing her anxieties feel realistic to you?

​The Climax: Did the final scene manage to build up tension? How did it feel to make that choice regarding Monika?

​The Technical Side: Did you spot any typos, grammatical errors, or weird visual/audio bugs while playing?

​❓ Open Q&A

​If you have any questions about the lore, the future branching paths, or the other things, drop them below! I'll be replying to everyone.

Just a few more things: Since I'm on school break, I have plenty of free time to write the rest of the Days of Act 1.

I'm open to help from any translator who wants to translate the Mod into English (I'm never going to use Google Translate to translate the script)...

Well, that's it. Thank you for reading and for your support of the project, and have a great day!

u/Agreeable-Lynx-2380 — 6 days ago