[Complete] [120k] [Dark Drama/Romance] Heavy dependency, trauma, soulmate cycle (Non-native writer)
Hi everyone! I have recently finished my full-length manuscript of 120,000 words, and I am looking for long-term beta readers.
I’m an author from Ukraine, and since English isn’t my first language, I’m looking for help with readability, flow, and phrasing. I need someone to point out where the English sounds unnatural or too "translated."
Since the book is quite long, we can start with just the first 2 chapters (around 5,000 words) to see if we are a good match! If you enjoy the story, I’d love to send you the rest.
About the story: This is a dark M/M drama about two guys who are soulmates. The catch? They find each other when one of them is already deep into addiction, and the other has been desperately searching for him—even though they were already in love long before this "fateful meeting." It’s an intense, character-driven story about dependency, trauma, and a bond that feels like a destructive cycle.
What you’ll find in the book:
- Substance abuse and hospital/rehab settings.
- Flashbacks to a harsh orphanage childhood.
- Fragile, raw teenage romance.
- A gritty atmosphere (set in Ukraine).
- Nightmares, relapses, and a heavy love/hate dynamic.
I am specifically looking for fans of dark, complex dramas who are comfortable with these themes.
Type of feedback I’d love to receive:
- Language & Phrasing: Does it read naturally for a native speaker? Where can the prose be tightened?
- Pacing: Does the story keep you hooked? Are there any parts that feel too slow or jarring?
- Emotional Impact: Is the dependency and the toxic/healing tension between the characters believable?
Trigger Warning: The story contains graphic depictions of substance abuse, mental breakdown, self-harm mentions, and complex psychological trauma.
Timeline: Since the manuscript is 120k, I don't expect a quick turnaround for the whole book. We can work at your own pace (e.g., chapter by chapter or in chunks).
Critique Swap: Not available at this time due to my heavy workload with the translation. I am looking for readers who just love dark dramas and want to read for fun!
If you’re interested in this genre and are willing to take a look at the sample chapters, please comment here or send me a DM! I will share the link via DMs only.
I really appreciate any help! Thank you so much!
Agrippina Rain