u/Alternative_Use_1951

i was thinking about a story of a successful lawyer getting killed by a gavel after sending the wrong person to jail, and spawning in a father times palace where informed that being sent to a world full of corruption and he needs to judge people to see whether or not they’re still going to be allowed to remain in. sent a cave and given a note saying who gonna put on trial and why (he has to find the evidence) he soon meets a group of people who stumble into his cave (he appears be showing a clock that is 5 seconds from 12:00 when it hits 12:00 he appears) he uses his power to inflict every wound they have ever had. Any ideas to improve it, Ik it can be

i plan for the power system to be like JJK as everyone gets like a unique technique as some can be passed down like the classic example of like a “hero” skill, but some can be like incredibly niche like the protagonists technique “the 4th dimension”and it all relies on the quality and quantity of your something (idk the name yet) like if you have a little bit of good something you could potentially get off one great shot and then just Be useless or fire off multiple mid shots with lower grade something

the world: there are 2 continents

1: an extremely land like think of the Minecraft the people who settled there needed something extra so that they could survive so they developed the something Their ruled in a more monarchy sense as one person owns like most of the land. They’re like seven people who own the rest everyone else is just Rents ( something users)

2: A more Lush continent, but with all the extra greenery stronger, my monsters appeared, but they just figured out that they could stick together and they’re Probably fine. They developed a democracy type thing, but instead of voting, it’s like who strongest The residence of the continent pick two people to fight Each each other to see who rules next (The former head of the continent can also join the fight) (Non- something users)

what if there’s a story about a hero, who fights the strongest villain like a lot but throughout the story, it slowly hinted that it’s his butler, who is the strongest in like the world

what if when the support was kicked out of the heroes party he turned off the automatic healing. He was giving them so they started like feeling a lot of pain because if you think about it, why would evolution keep powers like hero extremely rare if it didn’t cause major backlash to the body, so it turned into a wild goose chase onto finding him and getting him back. Before like the end of the year.

i was thinking about a story of a successful lawyer getting killed by a gavel and spawning in a forest with a note saying “time is an ally” soon he figures out he can manipulate time and uses it to pass judgment on corrupt governments and organizations (he appears be showing a clock that is 5 seconds from 12:00 when it hits 12:00 he appears) he uses his power to inflict every wound they have ever had. Any ideas to improve it, Ik it can be