u/AmoebaConnect4548

[Complete] [70K] [Contemporary Romance] Emilia Emilia

Twenty-two-year-old Emilia Harris has her life figured out. She has a loving boyfriend, a carefully mapped-out future, and a one-year digital media internship in London before returning home to Boston to build the life they've planned together.

Then she meets Adrien.

Her spontaneous, foul-mouthed British flatmate is everything Emilia isn't, and their unlikely friendship introduces her to a terrifying possibility: she might want something different from the life she's spent years planning.

Funny, steamy, and emotionally messy, Emilia Emilia explores desire, infidelity, friendship, and what happens when the person you're becoming wants a different future than the one you planned.

Content Warnings: Explicit sexual content (open-door scenes), infidelity, emotional betrayal, strong language, alcohol consumption and intoxication, relationship conflict, and emotionally intense breakup scenes.

Looking for: 

  • human feedback from people who enjoy the contemporary romance genre.
  • reader reactions, character arc and voice, romance and spice, pacing
  • I am not in need of line editing at this time
  • 2-6 week turnaround

I am open to swaps with other authors in similar genres and themes

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u/AmoebaConnect4548 — 3 days ago

Looking for beta readers for Dystopian Romantasy

Everstone may appeal to readers who enjoy:  slow-burn romance, dual POV, heavy banter, moral complexity, earth-based magic, found family, trauma recovery, enhanced abilities, political intrigue, high competence, accountability and psychological healing, oppressive societies, and rebellion.

Everstone: Within the Everstone walls of the Citadel, children from outlying villages are injected with a serum and deployed as weapons.  The Council calls it a cure.  

Ayla is the Grand Architect’s daughter, a Junior Ambassador who unknowingly sources raw materials for the serum that drives the Asset program. With her mentor, she secretly practices forbidden earth-based Weaver magic, protected by the privileges afforded to her as a Silk.

Asset 3 has spent five years as the Citadel's most lethal Asset.  Nameless, even to himself, he survives through discipline, obedience, and medically induced dissociation.  Completely disconnected from his humanity, he uses his enhanced abilities to catalog the world through military duty logs and biometric scans - until she cuts through the static and his conditioning starts to glitch.

When their paths collide in the shadows beyond the Citadel walls, Ayla refuses to look away from the humanity beneath the weapon. At the same time, Asset 3 finds that feeling for her means feeling everything.  Including what he’s done and everything he’s lost. 

But understanding someone does not erase what they've done.

Ayla must confront the harm beneath the privileges she has benefited from, while Asset 3 must decide if survival is worth the price of his humanity - and whether either of them can bear what it will cost to love the other.

Spice: 3/3.5 - open door, descriptions of sexual acts using explicit language.

Content warnings:  child exploitation, abuse, assault, consensual sexual acts, sexual assault, coercive sexual situations, torture, human trafficking themes, violence and death, grief, trauma and PTSD, psychological dissociation, psychological conditioning/brainwashing, forced medical experimentation

Currently complete at 65K words.

Looking for: 

  • human feedback from people who enjoy the romantasy genre
  • reader reactions: character arc and voice, romance and spice, world building, pacing (specifically looking to expand), or anything else you might enjoy providing feedback on

Looking to gauge interest and can send a manuscript and feedback form (if you want) on 6/23 and anytime after. If you are interested, please reply here and/or send a message.

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u/AmoebaConnect4548 — 4 months ago