is this too much information for a first chapter?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zb4FXbLab0lTplZJFOSjKqhKD46wEnC8lcFEbvPhZbk/edit?usp=sharing
ive heard of new authors bombarding their reader with too much information, especially during the first few chapters or even pages of their book, and idk if im guilty of this. any advice is appreciated, related to the question or not!!
quick edit: no, this isn't the entire chapter lmao