Feedback for the first chapter of my WIP
Hi everyone! I am hoping to get a critique on the first chapter of my latest WIP. A literary psychological thriller, working title B.R.i.D.G.E. Trigger warning, this novel does deal with domestic violence abuse.
I’d love to hear any feedback you have, some things I would love feedback on are:
Is the first-person PoV working? I know it’s not for everyone, and want to see if I am pulling it off or not.
At any point were you confused in a non-intriguing way?
Did you find yourself skimming at any point?
What emotion (hopefully some emotion) did the ending leave you with?
Would you continue on to chapter 2?
Thanks in advance!
P.S. sorry if there are any issues with the formatting, I copied it from my scrivener doc to Google Docs in order to share it, I gave it my best shot to clean it up but there is a chance I missed something in the formatting in Google Docs.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VIAlcxKPbnmzer1wH3FKb7hhJ8L9u\_4QmtHp4FKlZ1Q/edit?usp=drivesdk