Yo that's a cool story about defining your own destiny and triumphing against all odds as a nobody that you got there
Wouldn't it be better if we say the protagonist is actually the reincarnation of some deity and always meant to achieve what they did? 🤔
Shouldn't all of their friends also be super cosmically important? Otherwise it's kind of boring no? 🤔
It would be sad if their parents snd grandparents were just randos right? They have to be legendary in some ways as well I think 🤔
Their mentor, it can't just be "some guy" right? What if you make them one of the most important and powerful person in the universe? 🤔
Shouldn't the story be about the survival of the whole world? It would be too simple if it's about just some guy who wants to achieve a dream or reach a goal they set for themselves 🤔
That thing they received at the beginning that was mostly symbolic, can't we make it so it is actually some super important artefact? You don't want people to think it is important for "abstract" reasons 🤔
Why is the protagonist only fighting with techniques they developed for themselves? Wouldn't it be cooler if something awoken in them to give them some OP underserved powers? 🤔