u/Arlo_Cade

The first image is what I just finished, the second is the very first line and colour draft, and the third is my character that I wanted to draw.

I'm not sure if I need to edit my original post and put the updated version on that instead of creating a whole new post, so sorry in advance if I did something wrong.

I just want some tips and advice on how I could improve, because the eyes still look weird to me. I think I need to move the right eyebrow to the right a bit more? But it just looks a bit off. Thank you!

Just looking at it, I can see the chin will need redoing, and maybe the bangs. The two other images are just the kinda reference photos. I'm not great at faces or bodies, so I want to improve that! Any tips on how to improve? First proper time back to drawing after a few years.

I didn't realise the short miis stand on stools for the fountain! I just found this out, it's adorable.