u/Aube-Dreams

Silence hides my wounds,

The call of pain has no sound.

Ache of heart resides in dead,

Wish we have never met.

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Meeting of two broken souls,

Who is supposed to take the call?

Call to unveil the shattered dreams,

Who deserves to hear my heart scream?

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Time is taking its course,

Courage requires mind's force.

Breaking this tough stone,

Needs my most valuable core.

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It took all my strength,

Maturity is the fruit to my quench.

Making freedom my take,

I have to do for my own sake.

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To turn darkness into brightness,

Flip the table and be earnest.

To listen the whispers of light,

At the end, we made it out alive.

~Aube Dreams


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u/Aube-Dreams — 22 days ago

Silence hides my wounds,

The call of pain has no sound.

Ache of heart resides in dead,

Wish we have never met.

---

Meeting of two broken souls,

Who is supposed to take the call?

Call to unveil the shattered dreams,

Who deserves to hear my heart scream?

---

Time is taking its course,

Courage requires mind's force.

Breaking this tough stone,

Needs my most valuable core.

---

It took all my strength,

Maturity is the fruit to my quench.

Making freedom my take,

I have to do for my own sake.

---

To turn darkness into brightness,

Flip the table and be earnest.

To listen the whispers of light,

At the end, we made it out alive.

~Aube Dreams

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u/Aube-Dreams — 23 days ago

Art of love is something I adore,

I am the ocean and you are my shore,

Thinking, standing in summer breeze,

Your voice makes me freeze.

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Whenever I look at books,

They remind me of your naughty looks,

You are the dream I daily watch,

Your ocean eyes makes me lost.

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My heart looks out everywhere for you,

Why does it always worry about you?

Is it really love or just admiration?

Yet seeing you is my only satisfaction.

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I wanna stay with you for all four seasons,

Adoring the way of expressing love with tokens,

Dull life feels colorful with you around,

With every touch, my heart quickly pounds.

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Your presence is the wind of autumn,

Makes leaves fall; stuck at the bottom,

But the season we love has to go,

Not every tide finds its shore.

~ Aube Dreams


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u/Aube-Dreams — 25 days ago