This post is in search of a few beta readers interested in reading my novel and providing feedback. Lovers of fun, slow-burn romance stories wanted!
Here is a short blurb.
As the youngest principal of Barryview Charter High School, Katie Raven had perfected her life down to a tee. She had a thriving career, an immaculate routine, and absolutely no drama whatsoever.
So when an online fan club starts obsessing over her, Katie does what any rational woman would do—she drunkenly tells off her fans. Problem solved.
One sarcastic post was supposed to shut it all down. Instead, it ignited a level of attention both professionally and privately that Katie never asked for.
As her carefully controlled world begins to crack, four very different men she'd been completely oblivious to step into her circle. Each offers something she didn’t realize she’d been missing, and together, their presence forces Katie to confront a dangerous question: whose definition of perfect was she reaching for?
This book is a reverse harem, why-choose story where the main female character ends up with multiple male partners, written in 3rd person limited. There is no mm.
A short excerpt. I'm happy to provide a sample read of the first three chapters to see if it vibes with you. DM me if interested.
Content warnings: This is an adult romance, why-choose novel featuring adult relations and sexual acts. This content is meant for 18+ years old and is not intended for children.
Feedback Request: I'm currently looking for feedback for pacing, but also for just general reader reaction. This story has not been professionally edited yet, but notes on grammar errors or awkward phrasing are always appreciated!
My preferred timeline: Ideally, I'd like feedback within a month from the start date.
Critique swap availability. I'm open to a critique swap for works under 100k words. I'm content to read just about anything, but I always enjoy romance and fantasy genres. My feedback will match the quality of the feedback I receive. For critique swaps, I'd prefer to swap sections of the story at a time if reading a finished novel.