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Pensacola Beach

A Kris Kristofferson inspired song.

Lyrics:

A banner on a casket, a picture by a rose / Bobby never questioned, the order of command / He ran into the fire, at the flourish of my hand / Knowing he was never coming home

I watched the water burning, on a far off people's sea / I held men to account, when no account was held to me / I've prayed on Pensacola Beach, and watched the sun go down / On days when it was just my Lord and me

The promise of redemption, is the lonely path I choose / But no amount of prayer, keeps a hundred souls at bay / Lord I hoped that I'd be home, in Omaha one day / Listening to Bobby play the blues

I watched the water burning, on a far off people's sea / I held men to account, when no account was held to me / I've prayed on Pensacola Beach, and watched the sun go down / On days when it was just my Lord and me

Bobby used to whistle, as he wrote his letters home / Our momma hears that whistling no more

A pistol on the table, a note left by the fire / Midnight blue and gold, solemn and composed / For one last time I need to feel the sand between my toes / Kneeling as the choir sings me home

I watched the water burning, on a far off people's sea / I held men to account, when no account was held to me / I've prayed on Pensacola Beach, and watched the sun go down / On days when it was just my Lord and me / Today I know it's just my Lord and me

u/Away-Analyst-7221 — 4 days ago

Country Storytelling

I love American country storytelling songs and always wanted to write them. Is it OK for middle aged English guys to do that?

Lyrics:

My dad only called me when he drank I saw his name and let it ring I'd heard those words a hundred times before And told myself I'd call him back at four He kept my photograph upon the dash When he should've watched the road Forty winters he drove that rig Ready for the start of spring

I called at four and it rang out I called at five the line was dead At six I heard a knock upon my door A lone star shining on a badge They said he pulled a family from a burning car Then went back for the baby boy Neither of them stood a chance But neither of them had a choice

Cold morning in Uvalde The mesquite's holding frost The town's still pinning ribbons For the man they think they lost He knew where to find me On the left side of the dash The baby that he couldn't save Who never called him back

The whole town came to shake my hand today I smiled and I thanked them one and all November casts her shadows long Where the county put his name up on a wall It was easier to let it ring Now the April sun will always wait So I’ll take his secret with me As I drive the 83 the other way

Cold morning in Uvalde The mesquite's holding frost The town's still pinning ribbons For the man they think they lost He knew where to find me On the left side of the dash The baby that he couldn't save Who never called him back

u/Away-Analyst-7221 — 10 days ago