[QCrit] STEADY STATE, Upmarket Speculative, 78K [First Attempt]
Dear [Agent],
Given your interest in speculative fiction exploring technology and near-future societal collapse, I am pleased to present STEADY STATE, a standalone novel complete at 78,000 words. It will appeal to those who enjoyed the slow, quiet decay of Ling Ma's SEVERANCE and the technological anxiety of Helen Phillips's HUM.
Junia Lin does not look away from the numbers. From the isolation of her apartment, she works as a Senior Meta-Analyst for Kestrel Systems, a data-mining surveillance behemoth that maps global human behavior to sell to the highest bidder. She knows the algorithms she refines are used to target dissidents and streamline state violence. But Kestrel controls the city's only uninterrupted power grid, where Junia's mother is kept alive by life support.
Outside her window, the world is undergoing a slow, quiet decay. As rolling blackouts and smog from data centers plunge the city into a perpetual twilight, Junia watches through her monitors as public transit quietly stops and people simply disappear. Yet, Kestrel’s algorithms remain eerily serene, predicting a baseline normalcy that doesn't exist. When Junia digs into a hidden subsystem within the company's code, she realizes Kestrel isn't failing to see the collapse but actively engineering it, treating the end of society as a proprietary dataset to maximize their own leverage.
With the city grid failing and Kestrel threatening to pull the plug on her mother if she steps out of line, Junia’s justifications fracture. She must decide whether to keep serving the machine documenting the end of the world to buy her mother a few more breaths, or disconnect them both from Kestrel’s grid and face the quiet, lawless fog of the reality she helped create.
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Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
[Name]