u/BalletPatty11

Hello, I hope you are doing well. I recently solicited feedback from the Blacklist website, and some of their advice I agree with while other seems based on a mis-reading of my script. To see if maybe I mis-read my own writing (which seems unlikely), please provide feedback on what you think of it. Thanks!

Logline: An overlooked court stenographer takes justice into her own hands and quickly finds herself struggling to juggle being blackmailed by the District Attorney, preparing her daughter for the rite of Confirmation and evading the suspicions of her boyfriend. Inspired by the novel "Crime and Punishment" by Fyodor Dostoevsky.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gXl8xrH4lqDd53o9E0SprXt5in_Od6bl/view?usp=sharing