Word Count: 124,037
Status: Complete
Chapters: 35
Series: Book One of a planned trilogy

Premise

An orphaned farm worker falls in love with a British princess while mysterious forces tied to his forgotten past begin to resurface, leading him toward a truth that may redefine his identity—and possibly alter the fate of the world.

Genres

• Science Fiction
• Mystery
• Adventure
• Romance
• Coming‑of‑Age

Story Elements

• Character‑driven narrative
• Interpersonal relationships
• Secrets and worldbuilding
• Identity, resilience, destiny
• Emotional development and high‑stakes conflict

Feedback Areas

• Pacing
• Characters and relationships
• Worldbuilding
• Plot cohesion
• Dialogue
• Confusing or underdeveloped elements
• Overall reading experience and interest in continuing to Book Two

Additional Information

This manuscript is fully drafted and currently undergoing revision.
Total length: 35 chapters, ~124k words.
Book One of a planned trilogy.

If interested, feel free to comment or send a message.

Hi everyone! I’m currently revising a novel I wrote a few years ago, and I’m looking for a beta reader who’d be interested in giving me honest feedback. The story blends several genres: Science Fiction, Mystery, Adventure, Romance, and Coming‑of‑Age, with emotional, character‑driven moments and a strong focus on relationships.

Short Pitch:
An orphaned farm worker struggles to build an ordinary life while impossible abilities and a forgotten past begin to haunt him. When a conspiracy forces him to confront the truth about himself, he discovers he was never an ordinary human.

There’s no publication date or anything planned yet—I’m still figuring out what I want to do with the book—but I’d really appreciate having someone read it while I continue editing.

If anyone is interested in checking it out and sharing their thoughts, please let me know. I’d be truly grateful for the help!