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[Complete][31k][Political Fantasy][Olympus Meets Earth]

The gate opened in the Oval Office on a Tuesday. By Friday, Alaska was gone.

The god responsible offered a mountain range as compensation, coffee trading rights, and a seat in Congress. President James Henry said yes — because what else do you say to something that can destroy continents?

Olympus Meets Earth is a reverse isekai political fantasy following the first year of contact between humanity and a world of elemental gods, dragon nobles, shadow kitsune, and vampires who started as desperate refugees. Earth has eight billion people, nuclear weapons, and democracy. Olympus has magic, Divine Cores, and a bored lightning deity who just wants somewhere interesting to govern.

The thousand year trial period has begun. God is watching. The angel guarding Eden hasn't moved in millennia.

Someone's about to make it move.

I just finished my first draft of my story and need a beta reader to tell me who they love and who they hate, where they got confused, where they wanted to skip, what parts moved too slow or too fast, where physical details like feeling or smell or action between words would help. I would be glad to read anyone else's fiction in exchange.

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