a few of you have asked me to post the actual ads. here's why i'm not going to, and what i'll give you instead.
quick context so this isn't just talk. august so far: $514.06 in meta spend, 31 form leads, $16.58 cost per lead, $5,230 closed. that's revenue not profit, and it's month to date, not a full month.
now the ads.
first practical problem is they're ugc. real people talking about their experience with my company in my market. you literally cannot run them. there's no logo swap version of that.
second problem is that creative is built around my offer, my pricing, my ideal customer, my area, and what my competitors here are already saying. change any one of those and it stops working. the ad isn't the thing. the fit between the ad and everything behind it is the thing.
i've been on the other side of this. i spent months saving winning ads i found on youtube and in the ad library, rebuilding them, running them. barely moved. because i was copying an output from someone whose situation i couldn't see.
so here's the part that actually transfers. the script skeleton:
cold open on the problem. no intro, no name, no logo. you have about 2 seconds
say the objection out loud before they think it. price, trust, whatever it is in your market
the turn. what changed, told like a story, not a claim
show proof instead of stating it. footage does this, adjectives don't
the offer in one plain sentence
one low friction next step
that's the whole structure. run it through an llm if you want, you will get a decent script
but know what it won't tell you: which of your five variants to kill, why the winner won, or what to swap when it fatigues, which it will, usually inside a week. that part only comes from running it yourself and paying attention.
and honestly the script is the easy half. the offer is what makes or breaks it. so instead of the usual "ask me anything," here's something more useful.
comment with these three and i'll write you an offer, publicly, right here:
what you do and where
your average job value
your current offer, word for word, exactly as a customer would hear it
i'll do the first 10. no dms, no links, i'll just reply in the thread so everyone can see the reasoning. if your offer is already fine i'll tell you that too, and where the actual problem probably is instead.
**Mods don't remove this post i'm not selling or accepting dms just genuinely helping my community**