u/Careless-Evening4865

Hi, my name is Daniel. I made a video of a narration of the story called "I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream" and I would like to share it so you can give me your opinions and let me know what I can improve. I'm not asking you to subscribe or like it, just to tell me what I can do better. The video is in Spanish, maybe for those who are practicing the language. Thank you very much for your time.