
Would genuinely appreciate feedback on this cold email script
Hey everyone,
Would genuinely appreciate some honest feedback on this cold email script I’ve been working on.
Mainly trying to improve:
• reply rates
• sounding more natural
• reducing friction
• avoiding sounding too salesy or AI generated
Would love to know:
• what feels weak
• what you’d improve
• what sounds good already
• whether the CTA works naturally
• if you’d personally reply to this
Here’s the script:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c182TszUjaArSEeao7_vRt519w1Azirnu55Hpk0Vr2g/edit?usp=sharing (They are 7 angles) Ignore the subject lines
Thanks a lot in advance, any feedback is massively appreciated.