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Hassan abbasi is one of my dearest shayar and I wrote ghazal like his one

Zameen ki pyaas ko apna lahoo pilana para mujhe

Sunehre shehar ko mitti mein hi milana para mujhe

Wo shakhs dhoop tha aur main barf ka ek khwaab

Usi ki jeet ki khatir to khud jalana para mujhe

Suna hai log ab saaye se bhi darne lage hain uske

So suraj pr jakr ghar banana para mujhe

Wafa ki maut par koi bhi rone wala kha tha

To khud hi apni mayyat ko kandha lagana para mujhe

Parinde puchne aaye thhe mujhse meri be-basi ka sabab

To apne hi haathon se apna shajar girana para mujhe

Usne meri qabr par aakr koi aaisa saawal kr diya

Jawab dene ki khatir dobara laut kar aana para mujhe

Suna hai shehar mein ab dhoop ka nasha hai sab ko

To apne hi saaye ko deewar se hatana para mujhe

Wo mujhse meri hi aankhon ka noor mang raha tha

To phir chiragh ki tarah khud ko hi bujhana para mujhe

Just me and my one sided love trying to hate her

But can't

So writing some ghazals

Pehli nazar ka khwab tha, sadiyon mein dhal gaya,

Ik shakhs meri rooh ki deewar chhal gaya.

Pata use bhi tha meri shiddat-e wafa ka dost

Vo janti thi sab, magar phir rasta badal gaya.

Gairon ki baahon mein use dekha toh dard mein,

Main dushmani mein khud se hi nashe mein jal gaya.

Surat ko dekhta hai zamana, magar yahan,

Seerat ko poojte hi mera dil nikal gaya.

Kayi saal usko jhaankte guzre the dar se hum,

Aawargi mein yun dhale ki uska ghar nikal gya

Vo kal kisi ke ghar ki amanat banegi jab,

Socha ye maine aur mera dum nikal gaya.

I write ghazals, so this is my first time sharing one of my creations on any social media, and I want people to judge me-if I am bad, then tell me I am bad. But if anyone likes this, please share your feelings with me.

And please read this till the end because IT ACTUALLY STARTS FROM Sher-4, please just read sher 4.

Sehra-e-dhoop mein zulfon ka woh saaya to aaya,

Lab pe mere ulfat ka paigham to aaya.

Hum toh dunya ki nazron mein gumnaam hi marte,

Teri berukhi se hi sahi, thoda sa naam to aaya.

Chalo jala diya usne mere khwaabon ka aashiyan,

Kam se kam meri dunya mein koi kohram to aaya.

Aatish-e-gul mein ek phool khila mere liye bhi,

Khair teri kahani mein mera naam to aaya.

Ishq ki raah mein ruswayi mili to kya hua,

Chalo isi bahaane lab pe ye jaam to aaya.

Bhula kar mujhe woh khud bhi bahut roya hoga

Mere qatl se hi sahi, uspe koi ilzaam to aaya.

Zindagi guzar gayi jiske intezar mein 'Jaana',

Chaukhat pe uski aakhir ye maqaam to aaya